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Dońt get fooled by the food rating I would avoid the story at all costs it is a diluted version of arifureta The writer is moving from arc to arc and keeping the reunion of the main protagonist without real reason
Shameless self-review.
I do hope everyone can enjoy this novel. Our MC will spend a lot of time on her own exploring and discovering things inside the MAZE.
The idea is to mix some regular fantasy troupes with some slice of life, showing how is to actually live as someone who fights monsters and explore different places for a living.
Currently read enough to write this review. The author did a great job in making the start enticing. Although the start is pretty slow, but hey what makes a great structure is its foundation.(pros and cons at the bottom if this is too long)I'll start with the MC. He had some dark sht past. In his past life he has been dubbed as a hero because he never killed anyone. Until he was betrayed by most of his friends whom he once protected (protected them from what? go and read the novel). He got reincarnated into a cultivation world as an adopted son of a patriarch. He also grew massive trust issue (well who wouldn't) and is now a lot more careful. If you have questions about his real family and if he cares for them, well they are not shown yet but hopefully soon(yes I am also excited for some familial fluff).The few characters that have appeared are well written. They are not flat. They are not those types who just sit on the side and cheer from what I've read. I can already see that this is not a one man army novel where the mc takes on the whole world alone. The harem is not rushed which is good. I can see that the author is planning on building a proper solid relationship with the potential harem member(s).That means r-18 will come a bit later(But Im sure author wont fail us when the time comes.). From what I said you can already guess that the romance in this novel is going to be great.The world building is amazingly done so far and has lots of potential. The mysteries being served to us are like a box full of treasures but you cant open it, it makes you want to dig into the authors brain and unveil them. I'll probably retract this review and write another one once more chapters are out.So to sum it upPros:1. The story is written well with its fair share of mysteries.2. The harem is not being rushed3. The world background is currently on its infancy but its got tons of potential4. So far the characters that have shown up are well designed. For the development we'll have to see in the futureCons:1. The slow start2. Some lengthy explanations which could have been said with fewer words great novel and its worth giving a go
Translation sucks.......character design sucks....... won't even understand anything......even mtl is better than this translation..........
Well, I will give 5 stars to the author...I like how she made the world itself, and how fun the character is...The identity of Elena and her past, and the situation. The feeling that I thought I already know what will happen next but then it is different.The mystery, makes you want to dwell more, and the unexpected truth in volume one, and the twist. Truly amazing. Although there are some grammar and some spelling that needs to fix, nevertheless it affects the story...All in all, I love it.Ben fatto!
I'm so impressed. This is indeed what is referred to as great imagination! The time you're taking or perhaps took to come up with such a plot deserves all the stars. so keep writing. I loved the book and I'm definitely in for the next chapters.
i want more of this novel i really enjoy it and the author has so much to work with considering WoWs historyif any one knows where the raws are please send me the link
A very good novel good to read in boring timesThe comedy is good and i hope the new chapters will come flooding in so that i can read them in batches
Wohohohoho great story with interesting plot. I been curious for every chapter and can't wait for new chap. I would recommend readers to read this novel.(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(☆▽☆)(☆▽☆)
A perfect blend of Fantasy with the game elements and mystery. Quite intimidating and Interesting. I would recommend everyone give a try and read upto 3 Chapters and I can assure you won't regret it
This is genuinely one of the best light novels I have ever read under the 'fantasy world' and 'system' tags. The only reason the score is 4.8 and not 5.0 is just because there is some awkward wording in some of the chapters, however; it's barely noticeable at all unless you're an immersive reader such as myself. This novel was on the recommended page of the webnovel app and for lack of novel to read, I decided to give it a try and I am very happy about doing so. The pacing is on the better side of novels, and the world background is set up beautifully. The male lead is again, very well-made and consistent in his decisions and personality, unlike some other novels I've read. Currently, there are less than 100 chapters and the new arc is only 2 chapters in; however, I can already tell it'll be great, and I personally cannot wait. I truly this will be one of the greatest hidden gems once it surpasses 175-200 chapters. I strongly recommend that whoever enjoys the 'system' and 'fantasy world' tags reads this. Author, thank you for your hard work and keep it up.
