Love the story, in general, the planning out of the world and the intricate design and character development is amazing. The protagonist has actual useful people who help him rather than needing to save them all the time, unlike other CN Protagonists. The best part is that Wang Wei doesn't think with his bottom half. So thank you for bringing this amazing novel and cant wait to see more
Very dissapointing, trash tamer novels that get picked over actual quality...all your gona get is word count chapters, dragged story and sudden cliques.
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This book is a masterpiece, why on earth this was dropped instead of being picked up is a heaven defying mystery. Although I'm currently only reading it on a semi-decent translating website (still lots of mistakes) it still manages to keep me interested and they're a few funny moments in it, just like versatile mage (one of my all time favourites and by the same author).
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The only probs is the updates.. need more chapter dailyThe only probs is the updates.. need more chapter daily!The only probs is the updates.. need more chapter daily!
novel full of over acting characters..,..........,......,,......................................................................................
Decent concept, Interesting characters that are mostly fleshed out. It has some of the small issues of a boy with the mind of an old man not acting his age from time to time. However overall does an above average portrayal of this compared to most authors.
However things very quickly go down hill because the author decides to do a massive time skip. Removing basically any chance the main character has to grow both in power and emotionally. I stuck with it to around chapter 500 because I genuinely enjoyed the beginning and was excited to see the growing phase. Unfortunately the author never really managed to capture my attention again after this.
The writing is not very gripping or suspenseful. Like sure there is "supposedly" some sinister plan going on in the background. But there's no sense of urgency. The villains all fall flat, and the author doesn't really do a very good job at holding your interest. The whole novel reads closer to a slice of life with a harem of underage women than anything else.
Overall I think boys aged 15 and under would find enjoyment in this story as it reads more like a harem of underage characters than anything deeper. Overall I'd say great characters and world building but terrible execution. Definitely a below average read.
the pilot is good and it's promising story. will look forward to more of the story. The opening was different considering some. This is intriguing. I just didn't stop reading. So cool ??. If you're looking to read some engaging stuff.
Gonna make a proper review later. Coz, webnovel doesn't allow me to make a review with no words ????.
Finally an update too. I'm happy with the new chapter. Cheers, sis! Always be healthy, so you can continue to update.Finally an update too. I'm happy with the new chapter. Cheers, sis! Always be healthy, so you can continue to update.Poppy is really annoying, because Alex has to fight with Alva. who exactly is Alva? already have a wife eh even cheating, sorry for the child
The story is well written, the plot intriguing, and the story has potential. keep up the good work, I enjoyed reading your story and hope to see more in the coming updates