Interesting synopsis. The first chapter went straight into establishing tension which I liked. Character depth is good as well, and writing quality is also good. Will keep my eye out on this novel for some time.
Was waiting for another novel about blacksmithin called “Blacksmithin the tempering begins with ones flesh” It has an original idea of forging oneself into a weapon
Could someone explain to me the time scale when they mention “x” number of moons or suns. I don’t think i missed where it was explained like how the units of measurement was but it makes it very difficult for to picture whats going on without a proper timetable
The novel is unfinished and at this point, I don't think it'll be finished.The story was decent but nothing amazing.Personally, I wouldn't spend my coins on this story.
