ShivangiRajput0498
very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Trash Book. MC does the same thing over and over again where he gets offended or gets into a fight with someone who has no idea who he has and thinks that MC is a random, and ends up killing them brutally even if the other person surrenders. No character development whatsoever. Same repetitive plot. Best part is that the book even got cancelled.
Really love how to author built the plot and how easy it is to feel immerged in tHat system. Can’t wait to see how the story will deVelope ??
read 19 chapters first, I like the story it's just that there is no mention of power levels do it is somewhat confusing but overall I like it
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This seems to be by the same author of the one about the dragon girlfriend and millenium seclusion plus Kunlun.
Good.
honestly better then what I expected from the premise of the story. keep up the good work.
The first chapter was really intrriguing, I liked it a lot. The only thing I would improve are the thoughts. Sometimes you wrote:‘...’And sometimes you just wrote:Atleast he didn’t...he thought.Just clarify how you want to say your characters are thinking as it will get a little bit confusing if you don’t.Other than that, the chapter is nicely written. t may lack a little bit of emotion but that’s just how I see it. You can imagine the characters well and how they act. You have a pretty clear view of them but still not much knowledge which I personally like because you reveal things step by step and don’t slam it into the readers face.Overall a reat book! Very recommendable?
so far I have nothing critical to complain about. it is so far a fun read.
My overall opinion so far is that the story seems interesting and has a different approach on the isekai genre. The approach taken is generally unique and I like the way the characters are brought in. As it's rare for me to leave reviews, I'll keep this saved and leave more of an opinion down the road. For now I think the writing is good and the world development is good, and overall it's going in a good direction! looking forward to more down the road Author!!
One of the best novels I have read on this site/app. It is well thought out to the point where I think the author searches the entire internet every time he needs a new monster. The characters that matter aren't 1 dimensional garbage and the writing is great and the author seems to put a lot of thought into word choice which I appreciate. The world background is good, but as of chapter 75 most of the interactions related to higher powers are scarce and the story is more supernatural than fantasy. The story development is still in the earliest stages but I still enjoy it a good bit and it seems like there are plenty of things to look forward too. The only reason I didn't give it a 5 star is because the author has trouble updating consistently. It is understandable since he is doing a lot of work on each chapter and trying to keep a schedule would be the same as saying "please rush your process and give us something that you don't want to put out because of time constraints" and I would rather have good writing. I rate it 4.8 out of 5 stars, but with time and someone else to share the work with I would change it to 5 stars. Thank you for the chapter Mr. author, keep finding obscure fantasy creatures and I'll keep dumping power stones.
