Man, idk how to feel about the ending. I mean, the story was always kinda mysterious in tone, but the story really became more and more esoteric by the end of it.The climax of the story happened 4/5 of the way through and the rest was like a hallucinatory mindfck. It was super vague and I don’t even know if MC truly succeeded at what he was trying to achieve at the end. Was it all just a temporary accomplishment?I guess the MC comes back to what’s left of his group in the last chapter, but with no confirmation that his efforts had permanent effects, the story ends up feeling like it could be the part 1 to another possible mindfck story.But I think it’s better off ending here. Since the story started off relatively lonely, I guess it’s fitting for the ending to be relatively lonely, too.
thx for the hard work on this.
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I read a few of the chapters and felt like rating the book. I can't say that I'm completely engrossed but I have to admit that the book does seem interesting.
Looking forward to more updates
First of all the premise of the story is good but, the MC of this story doesn't use his brain at all. He acts and thinks like a child. Always daydreaming when someone is talking to him and even when multiple people warns him to be careful because of the dungeon's abnormality he just treats it as air lol. He just collects different kinds of skills and tries to hide it to avoid attention ( Pov: Uses multiple skills carelessly so people will know it. Nice try hiding it smh ).
In other words if you have a lot of spare time you may try to read it to pass time, if not then good luck
so far loving the story, i enjoy calm slow paced novel that focus on the main characters internal thoughts, the conflict they face within themselves and so on. and this novel is doing a pretty good job in that so far.
now to the criticism, Just as the sun has it's spots, every rose has its thorns.
I'll start with the writing, don't get me wrong, the writing is very good, the style of writing is unique and i love it this way, it focus mainly on one POV, the grammatical error is almost non-existent. but my main problem is that you try to force things. like the conflict within Noah about accepting his new identity, you use the third person "He" to refer to Noah, and then you switch to the First person "I" as a way to show that our main character is having trouble accepting his new identity, and It was repeated in many paragraphs. it's a little bit annoying, but you still a new author, don't take my criticism as hate speech, I'm only saying that because i love the potential this novel have.
another thing I don't like, and that is a personal opinion, is the way the Noah is handling his current situation, but i have a feeling it wont last the same very long.
HONORABLE MENTIONS:
Loreem was an essential part of my speed reading through chapters with her funny GIF s and comments.
So far, that's my honest review,
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Interesting story. Even though at first I was confused about the concept of this story, slowly I understood. although I'm not completely, but at least I've read up to chapter 115 and it makes me forget about lunch time. This story seems light but able to attract the attention of readers. Most of what I like about this story is the funny moment time from several chapters.
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Sometimes all there was to life was hope, but even at that time, there would always be the choices that made life a little too hard. Between Tamiko and Gabe, pain was their enemy and maybe that same pain would be their refuge
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raws or can the author please continue the book it is one of the best based on the first 40 chaps
Very interesting synopsis and story. Every sentence makes you feel like you are wanting more. Just a little more. Only a few chapters in and I am very interested in seeing where this goes. Keep it up, author!
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