The novel is interesting and good, worth your time, there are some drawbacks in the form of grammar and the speed of events. But since the author is a beginner, this is forgivable and in terms of grammar there have been changes for the better. I would like to wish the author good luck in writing a novel and in promoting his novel. Author, I have a question for you: will there be Yuri in the novel, I hope not?
It's time for a review. I really like this. Keep it up ?
"Kaenji! Can you not talk about anime for 5 minutes?"
"Ha ... " I sighed and watch the beauty view.
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Me:ok then I will tell
With this they reached the gates of the village and when they entered they were greeted by the guards and they all went straight to the Hokage office. Hiruzen was going is paper work when he heard a knock on the door. "Come in" he instructed and the door opened to reveal Asuma and Kakashi with their respective teams.
Gatsby's house was still empty when I left--the grass on his lawn had grown as long as mine. One of the taxi drivers in the village never took a fare past the entrance gate without stopping for a minute and pointing inside; perhaps it was he who drove Daisy and Gatsby over to East Egg the night of the accident and perhaps he had made a story about it all his own. I didn't want to hear it and I avoided him when I got off the train.
I could use a little fuel myself
You'll never know if you don't go
And all that glitters is gold
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