I Will definitely not lie, but this is exactly how I would rate my book ?
Wonderful story with great background and setup ...hope you continue to do so and bring about a really interesting and unique story . ..also hope your work get recognised more .I have seen the wording and pace it's great too
Warning: a scum and a rapist MC. Should have an evil tag in this novel. Can’t believe another good potential novel just to be ruined by MC’s character. Author loser character is mixing with his novel. Sigh ……
This book has an interesting start. Keep up the good work!
This time it's been twenty-seven days since an update. Usually your long delays have only been a week between updates.Please update. Have you dropped this book??!Are you going to write anymore?Please update.
Close to being caught up so making a review. I believe the story is well written where as long as you like the type of story it is it won’t disappoint.The world is made well giving an idea of the size but not more than what is needed. The character interactions are enjoyable and have some depth. I enjoyed the mc as he is the type who lives by his own code which may be overall good but can involve dealing with illegal or more ‘evil’ characters to an extent if it can further his goals. He is more comfortable manipulating in the shadows but progressively does more in the open as he grows stronger. Would highly recommend to read the free chapters to see if you like it. Also the free chapters provided enough in my opinion to get a good grasp on the characters and story.
It's a good framework for a story, if not a little goofyPros:- Very descriptive writing, I can picture it like an anime in my head- First chapter has an interesting hook- Character designs (when they are described) are cool, like the boy in chapter 3Cons:- The chapters seem quite disconnected from each other (but maybe you have plans to tie them together in the future?)- The random romance in chapter 2 seems a little unnecessary- Reads like a creepypasta at some points
I'm actually very surprised at how much I like this book it's an amazing story so far I'm at the beginning of chapter 107
interesting story and world.good writing with a number of well thought out characters.the number of different plotlines that could intersect with each other is well considered.beasts,mystics and cybers make for some good angles and alliances.overall an interesting book and one im hopeful will continue and develop.
Its good. Waiting for more chapters. All the best author
Very nice historian concept of writing,just read to chapter 4 but like it so far.Keep up,cause readers will want to read more
Was an interesting read, kinda lost it when the last 25 chapters were of another book you're writing. Instead of making notes you literally put in DBS chapters 1-25, I get promotion but you took away from this book. Will the next chapter be of this book or your other one?