Muy buena novela los ultimos cap un poco cortos pero me gusta una de las pocas historias que sigo con frecuencia lastima que este en esta plataforma cuesta mucho importarlas al programa que me lee las novelas
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why do you even need fast pass what do they do almost every original book need fast pass after like 30-40 chapters not to mention 6 so what do you need them for
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this first chapter is really awesome, but after that, the writing quality and story development becomes distorted. Its really poorly written, and the plot deteriorates.
Love this ????, intriguing just can't stop More of this it help me in my leisure time.Brilliant write up, effort, composition.Lit?, kinda seem like I'm watching a movie ?.
The author has quite the imagination and thus, can creates a lot of different plots, settings and characters. Each of her stories reflect a will to make bew universes to explore. Dialogues could be better, but she already know how to make characters interract efficiently with each other.However, chapters deserve to be more lengthy, as numerous actions/events are barely mentioned and never sought upon in detail. Other mistakes are mostly English languages ones, so if you see some, leave a comment for the author to improve!
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What is this nonsense get it off my screen please, this is pointless and silly. ……………………………………………………………………………………////……._________Jentntjdnnfkemnduejtngkiwnejififnfkcihsnrkfishnfifuebfjufjrjfhfhfjkdkdjfjcjf
Please DOnt ... Dont ..... Dont Make the MC way too overpowered way too Soon .... And try too add innocent LOve interests .... The less bitchs the better .... No simps ... and a bit serious if possible .. You’ve picked a good subject though ❤️
a very intriguing readI always like the ability to add point, it very exhilaratingit's a fun book to read, hope it gets picked. It's not the best but a ready fun book to read
A beautiful story with interesting characters have to say...I didn't felt bored even for a moment...well done bro and yaa waiting for the other half of the story...keep writing?