The Sorcerer's New Dawn

you think your novel is something special so you only give 5 free chapters ,it's not special ,it's generic,go get a life,.,.,.,.,.zm,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

So does Qiu Lan end up with Cain?  ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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I just started reading this and listening to it at work and I have to say I'm loving it. The ancient feud, the mystic beast and world everything is fun to read, I can't wait to see him topple this family and all they have built. ? I wonder if the final level of a mystic beast would be a humanoid form would be interesting, I love that this has a bit of beast taming in it, I hope to see more beast added so far it is a spider and a weasel yokai, I saw later he gets a humanoid follower, I hope to see some other yokai beast added maybe a kitsune ?, a mizuchi, a nekomata, a byakko, a Phoenix, a dragonhumanoid someone with oni bloodline, a tengu bloodline, someone with nurarihyon bloodline ?. Got to cover the basics ?, just throwing ideas but whatever is come I'm sure it will be awesome

The author has quite the imagination and thus, can creates a lot of different plots, settings and characters. Each of her stories reflect a will to make bew universes to explore. Dialogues could be better, but she already know how to make characters interract efficiently with each other.However, chapters deserve to be more lengthy, as numerous actions/events are barely mentioned and never sought upon in detail. Other mistakes are mostly English languages ones, so if you see some, leave a comment for the author to improve!

"Straight to the point." He warningly said. Frank suddenly speaks loudly as he can to announce the breakable part.