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Pretty good so far. Writing quality is very good; I did not notice any mistakes. The MC seems quite interesting, and it compels the reader to want to read more. Keep on writing author; you're doing good!
I like the story I just whish it would hurry up and get to the good bits the story hints at. Thankyou for the good story that has gripped me from the start.
The story is good. And the way the author wrote is good. Also, the author wrote nicely. Although there are punctuation mistakes it is good. And the story is fast paced. The scenes changed quickly it doesn't make you bore. All the Best Author!
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I like this story a lot but it kinda feels like its starting to stall. It went from a good development to being all about *** without the ***. Don't get me wrong I like ***, but I would rather not have every chapter be about it. Anyway I hope this story gets back on track or its going to get boring to read.