A magician as the main character is always difficult, since there are a lot of things to consider, it's hard for me to call the main character a magician. Non-linear storytelling is used out of place, and in general we will remember about it after half a year? There are enough questions for the minor characters. The idea of the novel is very good, but nothing more.This is what I collected in the first 40 chapters.
Story is well written and is event overall. My biggest complaint would be that the story jumps arounds too much. Thought I think this is the author just being inexperienced. Or maybe there’s a grand plan that just couldn’t be connected fast enough. I dont like how the story painted a terrible situation due to being powerless & then just ingores it like. The kid gets beat up on a regular basis so why doesn’t it warp his character?
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The story doesn't feel too rushed, and it's horror/sci-fi which is a plus so you know it's going to be some action. This is definitely a new trope and you won't want to miss it if you like a bit of intense gore!
This is great!Writing Quality: No typo's as far as I have read, the prose is good I've not been confused once so far. There are some info dumps but those are essential for world building.Story Develpment: The author clearly has a plan for the plot, so far the story is cohesive.Character Design: The cast so far is pretty small, we get time to spend with characters before new ones are introduced which is something I adore.Updating Stability: As of the chapter I'm reading 4 chapters per week, which is phenominal with the writing quality.World Background: Future Earth space age, I've not read far enough for anything else.
it's good but, I want more. It feels like it ended without finishing the story.
Bit late to the party for this. A bizarrely light hearted novel for those with good taste. I wasn't expecting something this enjoyable going into this but I must say I'm pleasantly surprised.This is a borderline gag novel so there isn't a need to go too deep into the novels details but it is a fun, semi serious novel with a fairly likeable protagonist. Standard but sensible worldbuilding, characters and power systems. There're only 19 chapters right now so all I can say about the story is that it's not bad so far.For once, there are no signs of any bullies, jealous 3rd rate antagonists, young masters, "school belles" and other tiresome tropes in sight. That alone is a huge plus personally. Most side characters are actually a little bit likeable. 4/5
story progression is too slow. system takes too much space. and other things etc.. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
can someone explain the first chapter with some sort of referenceby that I mean what is it he is seeingIs this a Pokémon fan fictionI stopped at chapter 1 due to it not being clear to myself wtf is going on with his vision
I like it as how the MC doesn't just go about helping random people like a hero and how he focuses on what is importantone of the best apocalypse book in my opinionhope it doesn't get dropped ?
loveeeeeeeeee itttttt... literally hilarious and funny and at the same time good, i recommend reading it.?you wouldn't regret it for you will laugh literally hard
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