Current rank 1, idk if it’s relevant at the time your reading this.
The problem with Chinese mc is they're too arrogant, prideful and they don't think of the consequences that will happen because of the action they took.
Same with the villains they're all young masters that can't take a single grievance and will always take revenge, after they are killed there comes the father and then the whole clan, after that comes their ancestors that the whole world thought are dead but are secretly cultivating in some places for breakthrough to another level.
what kind of stupid motherfucking idiot of an MC is this anyway. the asshole died in the hands of a beautiful woman and even after reincarnation, the bastard keeps all women around him like a flock even if they want to kill him. the author is a motherfucking masochist.
The story developed fast, and it’s rushed there’s a lot that could have happen, but I still like it so it’s 6.8/10
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I like how the FL's character development seems to progress visibly. I really want to know when she'll turn into her previous cunning and scheming-self uwu
The beginning was pretty solid, but man, they really threw some random tragedy at the main character, which felt a bit forced. After that though, the story was moving along nicely, keeping a good flow. But as soon as the MC left the Village for the next town, things started to drag. Plus, the plot armor was so thick. The villains just kept messing with him, and all he did was think, "I'll remember this, I'll get you back someday," without really doing anything about it. Maybe the author wanted to show the MC's growth in excruciating detail, but it just made the story super slow and it's frustrating to see those villains keep coming back for more.
It was a good start loved the intresting and intriguing setting of the story can't wait to read more..... the introduction of the villian was nice i hope to see more character development still but overall it was nice
First of all, it's a very well-written book, and I really enjoyed reading it. So I will give my pros and cons now.Pros:-It's well-written and easy to understand, which is probably because the author is from America, and English is their mother tongue. But it doesn't matter since the story is great!-The title of the book is great and unique.-The background is well-explained, even though I wish there would have been some more information about his past and how the three of them became good friends.Cons:-The chapters are way too long. You should probably split them into smaller chapters, but not everyone will probably dislike it. Also, it seems the chapters become shorter as the story progresses, which is good, but you should probably fix the first chapters which are way too long.-There are still some small information and grammar mistakes there and there in the story, but I'm sure after your book receives an editor, it will get fixed by him/her.Those were my pros and cons, but overall, I still give this novel 5/5 stars because I see a great future for this book.
i just started reading it and the grammar is awful. hard to read, i gave it 1 star cuz it doesnt deserves such a high rating it has now. so have fun with 1 if u edit the novel maybe ill changed it if its even possible!!!
this is my first ever review on webnovel I don't write them because I am lazy but this ... this is just utter garbage totally unrealistic and waste of time I read two chapters only two and fell like I have lost brain cells.its like a child wrote it
Esta muyyyyýyyyyyyyyyyyyyy bueno me encantaría seguir leyendo esta historia muy bien elaborada. Bueno llegando a este punto espero que cuando comineze la historia principal no se tan rápida sino que incluya más detalles.