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Hey Guys, I am the author of this book and firstly I must say that webnovel is an amazing platform which helps put my ideas out to the world and secondly about my book J want to tell everyone that the first three chapters in my book are not paragraphed and because of that the story looks bulkier but after the first 3 chapters the writing and paragraphing will get on track so, please do not quit reading the book after the first three chapters! With that said I hope you read my book and enjoy it.
I could not help but be a bit disappointed by this novel. It felt so good at first, but I could not help but notice that he feels like a complete noob at times, when he was supposed to be a pro who survived until the end. I also could not help but notice that in the first chapter, it was mentioned that he could rememeber anything if he just focused on it. I could not help but notice that he seemed oblivious to things that he should rememeber, or atleast have an idea of. An example being when he retrieved the pain relief pills through the menu. He was shocked they materialized infront of him, when after literal years of gameplay, he should have known that would happen for NPC’s.I could not help but notice that the technology tree seems highly limiting.
I'm in love with this book. As an avid basketball fan and player, when I first read this I was addicted immediately. This is the only basketball novel that I've read which is actually good and uses correct basketball terms (which is amazing). I've been reading it on and off for nearing a year now, and it pains me to see the lack of updates. I thank the author for this book, and hope he is doing fine. (please update this novel, im sure theres loads of people like me who love this book)
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A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
This is good **** it might need a bit more edit causeGrammar is a little clungy but it really nice.Straight from my ten thousand novel Try it you will not be disappointed
Why the **** would the Author names this **** stain after cthulhu when the similarities between cthulhu and his jellyfish are worlds apart??? This mother****er is lightyears away from becoming even slightly similar to Cthulhu!! This BS is a allpostive beta ***** that is willing to accept his enemy that tried to fight him into his own horde of idiotic imbreds he calls allies! Plus, in no way does this dumbass MC act like a god! He couldn't even impersonate himself to be an old and omnipotent god (even if he don't know the workings of the world!)! IF ONLY HE ACTED LIKE KLEIN'S THE FOOL PERSONA (BUT HIS OWN GOD PERSONA)... Then, only then.. Will this garbage be worth reading
Its a great story dont get me wrong but the author really needs a proofreader there are mistakes everywhere but other then that its really worth reading
So you telling me that the mc actually lost ALL OF HIS MONEY like how don't you at least have some secret money or some money in the bank or invested in something that can give you money because you are a pro gamer and you cant expect to be at the peak forever and should have a back up plan just in case you absolute toad