The story is interesting, nice plot and all. Only problem is, the names are being mixed up so many time can get pretty annoying. It throws off readers from the story just to find out who the author is writing about.
later when the companies develop you should let him enter the electronic business and control the telephone business
reviewing for the event fp keep up the good work
story seems to have a lot of potential, not fast-paced, which is a good thing. As seen to many of these stories, just shoot off and lose all integrity. it is my hope this book stays on the good path and has many chapters ahead of it.
Nice story. Like the MC. Needs more chapters. Will wait for more.
loved the storylinethe character and everything are so good, the funny parts are to die for
Hmm,how can I say this.This book is good,has a nice plot eventhough you think it's cliché but author has an amazing ideas tu surprise you.
A werewolf story set in a historical world filled with fantasy elements. A seductive ML who wants no one but our FL. No r*pe. Great sp*ce. A happy ending. What else do you need?
I like how the author just put an l in front of his name to name the main character ?, this book is really interesting, you'll surely win the webnovel rising star with this book
i just came for the free FP given for the review
cool good nice
Being familiar with the author's work, I can say that it is different from how his works usually are. The idea of skating used in gang fights is not half bad, but I hope the author prevents flawed world-building and insane plot armours.The initialization of the novel is good. I hope the author keeps it up. I don't seem to have noticed a major flaw in the story, but I can say that the concept of dyna blades is hyped up right from the beginning, which can lead to problems later.