Daisy
This author really makes endings amazing. If you haven't read Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint (another finished work of this author), go now because their works are masterpieces!
Does anyone know any "sign in" or "lucky draw" novels where mc likes to adventure outside instead of staying low profile
A good story so far, although not much characterization or world-building has happened as of yet.
Your writing has a way of transporting me to another world, one that's rich in detail and full of wonder. I've been completely absorbed in the story, and I can't wait to see what's in store for the chapters next. Thank you for sharing your talent with us I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!
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Since it’s a football novel with quality writing. I have to give this a 5 stars. Get back to work I want more chapters.
I feel like I am reading a manga where the protagonist focuses on only the battle and doesn't care about anything. Even though his actions or words can barely be trusted, when he starts doing, planning, and fighting, we can tell he is powerful and smart. Love him!
An editing would be appreciated, I can’t understand how you can post a story with so many grammar faults.Even I who is from a country where English is difficult to learn wouldn’t make that many mistakes.The story is good, the world background excellent, the characters could be better written but still acceptable, the story is finished so no need to wait for update.Other than grammar, the story is a gem that would probably have a deep success if it was readable.
wait why there are 7 power stones they used to be more than 200 ?
The writing quality of this book frightens me. I know English isn't the author's first language, but it's as bad as google translate for the 33 chapters that I've read. This book seriously needs an editor. Any editor that's well-versed in English and above the mental age of 14 will change this book for the better... or at least make it less excruciating to read.The story is quite a cliche, but I like the genre. I've only read a bit, so I can't say much, but it's pretty generic and monotone for a start. I can't see much character design. MC's backstory is very overused, and side characters only stay to the side. World background is at least interesting. It's always the world background bringing up the entire genre. Likewise, I only read this novel to immerse myself in the genre. And I only write reviews when novels are either extremely good or downright bad. I hope the author makes the plot exciting and hires an editor so I can continue to read and give it a chance once more. I'm forced to stop reading at 33 chapters in.
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