Forsken Crown

nice book. keep it up

The writing quality of this book frightens me. I know English isn't the author's first language, but it's as bad as google translate for the 33 chapters that I've read. This book seriously needs an editor. Any editor that's well-versed in English and above the mental age of 14 will change this book for the better... or at least make it less excruciating to read.The story is quite a cliche, but I like the genre. I've only read a bit, so I can't say much, but it's pretty generic and monotone for a start. I can't see much character design. MC's backstory is very overused, and side characters only stay to the side. World background is at least interesting. It's always the world background bringing up the entire genre. Likewise, I only read this novel to immerse myself in the genre. And I only write reviews when novels are either extremely good or downright bad. I hope the author makes the plot exciting and hires an editor so I can continue to read and give it a chance once more. I'm forced to stop reading at 33 chapters in.

A very nice story, need some more chapters to really judge but all in all a good novel. But seriously need more chapers, way more, MORE CHAPTERS

Hmm, la novela es buena, pero cuando un sistema de mierda te amenaza con matarte si no cumples su misiones, non importa si es beneficioso o no para el mc, se siente muy mal

Feeling the influx of energy inside of him, Enzo needed to release it, however, he didn't possess an Art. He had an abundance of energy, but no way to release any of it.

The ones that had survived the happenings at Shrek Academy were the Holy Spirit Douluo Yali and them, the Shrek's Seven Monsters, yet one of them wanted to quit? Tang Wulin turned to the side, shocked at what he heard. "Jiang Wang, you...?"