Nice story so far but we need more chapters ASAP??.
the characters are simple and easy to understand and read. but also complex enough to obviously have things hidden. ways of introducing characters is abstract and magnificent. It feels like a book version of TTIGRAAS
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This is amazing! I love the descriptive language. I love the execution and psychological edge this story has. The character designs sound awesome and the atmosphere is so unsettling and tense. Your writing style is so impressive, great work Goji !
Smiling I retorted, "I'm feeling fine father. Just not overly hungry. I've had a long day."
-Time to school
Didn't know why but she let out a small sigh and then smiled.
"I knew that you were in no real danger partner, so I thought I would see how you could handle it yourself" the Welsh Dragon replied.
Shuri's voice came from the Avenger's earpiece, "You're good to go, I've locked him out of the internet, he's trapped."
So, what are the chances, that our world is "real" and not a
"OMG!! And you're still waiting. She is one lucky girl. So Thomson, use this chance to express your feelings maybe she'll return to you when she listens to this."
"Eh..." Zhang Liu had no idea which hand to choose. However, he found one that wore a black glove behind the classroom. "You, over there, at the very back!"