Really liking the story so far, premise is genuinely good and makes me want to read more into the novel. A single question if you don't mind though. Is it a harem?
Great novel I just wish Author update it more often
It's a very good way to entertain my selfish imagination, and I would love to have it to add more chapters. When is this going to add more cause it's pretty good and fun for slapping face.
Pretty Good. Synopsis makes it sound stupid, but this is actually well written. Obviously ErGen's novel is going to be better, but this one is better then most week's winners.
I absolutely loved this novel. highly recommend! full of interesting twists and turns, lovable characters, as well as deplorable ones. good bad guys and bad good guys, makes you think a lot about the concept of good and evil. Xie Lian is an absolute favourite.
Don't let the bad reviews stop you from reading this awesome novel. First the r-18 comes in later. This is not a story that only focuses on getting lots of girls but giving those girls a good story with the mc. The adventure of the author from layers to layers is amazing. He even goes back to earth which is not something you see much from other novels with same genre.The characters are well written. Its not a novel where he gets a new girl in his harem every 100 chaps. He loves his fam and his scenes with them are pretty wholesome. His fam also plays a role and they are not just in the background. Claire and Logan power couple is one of the best out there. The girls in the harem are not trophies and are trying their best to get stronger.The cultivation systems are unique and might get a bit confusing as you go on but author has a guide for that. The mystery in the novel is even quite intriguing. The world is pretty well built. Author takes time to introduce the territories and its people. There is also a bit of comedy here and there.MOST IMPORTANTLY, he doesnt leave his wives when he goes on an adventure. He bring them and fights with him together. Something you hardly see in other novels.Im not saying that the novel has no problems but they are pretty small and are only at the start of the novel. The author improves along the way and massive improvements can already be seen early on the novel .As you go on you can see that Davis' adventure with his wives are amazing.P.S. : Shirley is a goddessOverallWriting Quality : 4.5/5Stability of Updates : 5 (Although we would love 3 chaps a day)Story Development : 5Character Design : 5World Background 5
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This reads like a mid-2010s **** cable tv show, and it's glorious.There's a certain feel in your story. Like your characters are really living their lives in the moment. It's a sense of wierd nostalgia that I cant put my finger on. It's good, is what I'm trying to say.Very wholesome. Keep on writing ?
This is a really an incredible story, written without any grammatical errors! This story speaks about the childhood life, nature and wild life. Also, this story is very adventurous!
Wow! I love it! Please continue the story. I like mystery novels. I would sure follow this one. I just noticed the dialogue of each character should be properly separated. But over all, nice writing and the plot is interesting.
I don't think i have ever read a story with a dumber mc than this story. the title misleads you to believe someone with common sense will be in the story. Reading this so has cause my disappointment to be immeasurable and my day is ruined.
First, let me say that my reviews of any book I do may seem harsh. They are meant help guide growth. However this author is by all accounts better than most on this site that I’ve had the chance to read. Although not a lot is known about the background of the “world(s)” the characters are developed to the point you feel invested in what happens to them. The author may not be the most stable of releasers, but he releases frequently and is trying to properly balance life and art. This is always a challenge for young authors and he deserves respect for trying to make sure the quality of his work doesn’t drop. I anticipate and expect great things to follow as LamenThief grows alongside his story. You would be wise to join before too many chapters pile up in front of you.