thats it? thats the final already? hope they will meet again & remarry
Good book I love the characters
bakit wlang Tagalog nito ...diko mahanap
The prose is commendable, with a captivating narrative that hints at profound depth. However, several key issues undermine its potential. The main storyline suffers from a weak foundation, a conspicuous absence of character development, and a convoluted system that unnecessarily drags on the plot. Additionally, the sideplots become increasingly implausible, failing to provide genuine motivation for the characters in a believable context.
While the protagonist does exhibit some character growth, his arc is so extravagant and unrealistic that, if the author doesn't reevaluate his progression, by the climax of the primary plot, the character would border on being the most exaggerated antagonist in the entire narrative.
Wtf, I was so busy in the plot I didn't notice that mommy became daddy?
uh... yeah if i wanted that i would read it on a specified novel not on a fanfic
All they do is breeding
I'm out
After reading the name I came here just to sh*t on it for being a cheap eminence in shadow knockoff buh found out it was the main thing
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It happens, report as a bug in the app and the lord will take care of this problem...
i am conflicted on reading this due to the tags
What in the world is that summary?
I managed to reach what might be the final installment before giving up. It's baffling why I didn't drop it sooner, considering even a casual reader could spot the inconsistencies. In essence, this entire work serves as an excuse for the author to indulge in their fantasies. I'm not opposed to stories that allow for character fulfillment when they're well-structured and not too disturbing. Initially, the narrative had some semblance of coherence and flow, but it fell apart as the author's self-insertion became more apparent. The plot became increasingly contrived and ridiculous towards the end, akin to how Daenerys' disregard for her Iron Fleet in "Game of Thrones" was jarring. Furthermore, the sexual content, particularly the author's fascination with Japanese lolis and large harem scenarios, becomes unbearable for those who aren't fans of such themes.