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This novel is really good, the grammar is also good. I hope to see more chapters soon (this is to fill the space)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haven’t read that far yet, but is seem interesting so far
There's something really profound happening beneath the comedy here, and I want to talk about it because the author keeps coming back to these two motifs—food and smell—and using them to explore what it means to be cared for. Cen Miao hasn't eaten real food since the base was destroyed and Caretaker Dad died. Every meal in these chapters is loaded with emotional weight. The steak he devours isn't just sustenance; it's the first genuine act of kindness he's received in what feels like forever. When Qin Zelin offers him the untouched piece, Cen Miao sees a good person—the same kind of person Caretaker Dad was. Food becomes the language through which care is expressed, and Cen Miao's desperate eating is really a desperate hunger for connection, not just calories. And the smell thing—let's not gloss over how weird and beautiful that is. Cen Miao is drawn to Qin Zelin's scent the way a survivor is drawn to warmth. In the apocalypse, smell meant danger (zombies) or safety (food, clean clothes, living people). Here, Qin Zelin smells like safety. Like a thousand times better than the smell of zombies. When he asks to smell Qin Zelin again and again, he's not being romantic in any conscious way—he's being a creature who associates that scent with survival. But the reader sees something else: this is intimacy. This is someone reaching out, clumsily, desperately, for connection. The slippers are another symbol I can't stop thinking about. Cen Miao refuses to leave them behind, and Qin Zelin says they're old and he'll buy new ones. But Cen Miao wants THESE ones because they're cute. They're his. They're the last thing connecting him to the life he had before everything fell apart. And Qin Zelin, in his own awkward way, says they're just as cute as whatever new pair he'll buy. He's not dismissing Cen Miao's attachment—he's validating it.
At first glance i liked the book and added it to my reading list but then the more i read it, i found multiple grammatical errors and some of the paragraphs don't even make sense AT ALL. And some of the things the female lead actor does or says are complete falacy like she knows she's a werewolf but denies it? i mean hatred is one thing but denial of existence is something else nd she changes schools and promises to avoid attention even using wigs but then she's asking for a party invite, talking back to a bully and even the school's bitches, dressing to impress, wanting to make friends with popular students, etcetra.... is a bit contradicting for me and i suggest the author to go back and make an edition.
Big fan of the unique spin Cook does on both novels with power systems as I find that the most enjoyable part of novels alongside world building. The characters around the MC are also interesting and are given enough depth imo. Keep up the good work.
This is my first ever review, I just had to write this as nearly all the 1 and 2-star reviews never read past chapter 20. which is obvious as they keep saying it's a cliche harem. this is as far from a harem as you can get. there are multiple girls at the beginning who show interest in the MC but he ends up with one girl how he stays with through the whole boom so far, it is a running plot point that he will never get a harem and dispises anyone who used their situation to get one, later on when his empathic abilities evolve to change peoples emotions, anyone girl who shows interest in him he changes there emotion so they don't, including a literal goddess. also, this has some of the greatest character development that I have ever read, you can physically see the MCs personality slowly change over time as he opens up to his now wife and 3 kids, even right now as of chapter 800ish there is still character development as he meets back up with his college friends after regaining his memories which he blocked of because of PTSD back in college. the only negative this I can say is that it is needlessly gorey with several occasions when they encounter zombie fetus' . Overall this is one of my favorite webnovels even, of which I have read 1000+ easily.
I prefer stories that aren't written in first person. I could handle it if it is, but this writer is the kind that has to ruin the story by constantly switching.
"Kaenji! Can you not talk about anime for 5 minutes?"
"What sir?"
But as all things go in Rachel's brain, it was too late for her cells to realize it. She dropped her head onto her desk, brought her arms to cover her head, closed her eyes and fell asleep.
I could use a little fuel myself
Jungkook went inside a room and went out holding two cages with puppies inside.
