Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?
make mc absolutely insanely handsome by awakening somthing inside him and it will make more impact on his villain side when he goes to any place female leads will have attraction towards mc so those son of heaven will have jealousy towards mc. and it will make story more believable or it won't after all female leads won't get attracted to just good looking guy after all they are always played by fate
A harsh review but that's the truth. Author had a promising premise but wasted it by rushing the story from the get go and seemingly brute forcing things like inserting romance very early on. Inconsistencies also started to prop up and judging by how the author just seemingly let it slide, not so promising. Thus, a rather unfortunate wasted potential that was ruined by blatant issues that made it bland, shallow, and forced.Benefit of doubt that the later chapters improved but the early chapters pretty much already crippled the read for me.
Just terrible. Don't waste your time on this.
I hope the author can update more chapters???PLEASE? very interesting novel each chapter is worth the money spent ? love❤️❤️❤️
From what I read, this story is fine. The writing can be a little too conversational rather than literary, but some of the descriptions are interesting. However, some of them I found to be needlessly overcomplicated to the point where it becomes hard to follow and less compelling without re-reading. The world building of this story is good, I feel like I would enjoy this more if the writing was more straightforward and unpretentious.
Now this is really interesting. author is there anyone in this novel who isn't evil. literally iam even suspecting his father true thoughts at this point.
Everything is good, so keep updating author nim, please
so far so good, i'll just reviewing this
This is one of the best zombie genre novels I’d read in a long time.
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