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I dropped after chapter 7. When genius MC uses violence in conflict with group of unknown for him people, with unknown forces during the first days in new world, when his knowledge of world is minimal. Reading about idiot is not wha5 I want.
Hey yo! I'm not fond in reading nor watching a horror book but then it has thrill so fair enough that I did take a look at your wonderful creation! Ur book is great and highly recommend it to everyone! Lovelots, Cie-LbiTch(Ciieee<3)Ps: just work a little bit more on your spacing, punctuation and grammar. Don't be down, it's for the improvement and I went into the route before so, I wanna help u out???
Despite it having many flaws, I enjoyed reading this novel, mainly because I learned the hard way that when reading a webnovel I should mostly turn my brain off... Anyway, let's get started on listing what I didn't like, since that's usually what I'm looking for in reviews. There are slight inconsistencies with main character's personality. Sometimes he's curious, sometimes he's not. Author seems to think that having limited curiosity is a strong point and insists that mc must be like that, which you know I'm not really against that, cuz it's his story, he can have his own views and can talk about them however he wants. But, whenever plot needs to move forward the curiosity somehow appears! Ta-da! It's like magic.As with any novel written for commercial purposes, it's full of cliches, this shouldn't come off as too much of a surprise at this point. There's nothing wrong with cliches, what's important is how it's used, but of course you can't expect much from a webnovel (once again). The cliche I'm talking about isn't the system or anything which has been elaborated on countless times, for some reason I've not noticed people talking about this much, it's when mc gets a new tool or ability and it miraculously comes in handy, for some god forsaken reason it's somehow just what he needed. But at least he doesn't get everything served to him on a silver platter, he still hasn't gotten the english skill he desperately needed but considering it has turned into his only weakness by now, I suspect it was kept to make mc not seem too op, while at the same time get a reason to make some jokes. The comedy is above average in this novel imo, it's not really good but isn't meh.The relationship with female characters seems weird. It smells of harem, but it also feels like max author will do is write suggestive things, I'd prefer if there's no romance altogether. Author randomly deducts mc's IQ for the sake of comedy, while at other times he becomes a straight A student. Police doesn't exist in this world, as far as I've noticed. A guy gets repeatedly beaten up over the span of approximately over a week, but doesn't report mc to the police. Possible explanations I can think of is not wanting to be known as a snitch, no one wanting to testify bcs he's a gangster (but his friends got beaten up together with him, plus since he's a gangster he could use threats), not wanting to lose face (but the whole neighborhood knows about it), or it could just be a plot convenience. I wonder which one is it? ?That'll be it cuz Webnovel lags really hard whenever I try to write a review.
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