The SEQUEL is out now!! "Outclassing the Achievement Junkie"!!!Join the new adventure following one of Jack's latest schemes involving a fresh achievement junkie MC, including a prologue with Jack and Bowzer in a dungeon crawl. Check it out if you want a fresh take on the Achievement System, new worlds to explore, tons of gods to meet/fight, and more AJ vibes than ever! ;)
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I hop you won’t take offense in this, but consider editing your book. I suggest using grammar-checking apps like Grammarly. This story has a nice premise, but it would be better if you touch up the grammar, spelling, and punctuations.
At Chapter 23
This is a very good Naruto fanfiction. The writing quality is very good. The sentences are well structured and easy to understand and the grammar is also very good. The chapters are also quite long which is even better.
The story is developing very well and is focused on the MC. There is almost no inconsistency in the story so far and the MC is developing at a very reasonable pace for someone having future knowledge of the Naruto world.
So far there have been very few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC, with them being his Academy Sensei and the Third Hokage. This aspect is very good as I don't want to read more about characters other than the MC, other than their interaction with the MC and their perception of the MC and his actions. And while the story may feel somewhat slow to others, I enjoy reading about how the MC trains and plans for the future. This will lay a very good groundwork for future development of the story.
The MC has a calm and rational personality and thoroughly plans his course of action, such as he follows a very well hashed out training plan. He is not OP from the start and does not have any cheats like a system or wishes from GOD or ROB, which makes this fic even better. There has been a lack of good naruto fanfictions such as this one which does not have any cheats and where the MC is also calm and rational without being an anti-hero or an outright villain. The MC is also not arrogant even though he has been at the top of his class for 2 years and though he is cautious to not gain any unwanted attention from Danzo, he doesn't portray himself as weak.
So overall I am very satisfied with this fanfic and looking forward to new chapters. I also hope that the author completes this fanfic.
Kudos to the author.
Something's rising, and it's not the planet of the apes...It's the planet with something deeper, deeper than your mo- yeah, let's not go there...Kekeke...
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harem? really? those are actually difficult to write in a non immersion breaking way. It's usually not believeable in execution and often drags the novel down. Also, even if your pets are humanoid, it's still messed up to do things like that with them.
Kudos to author-kun for making this book. The video game like system was totally well written and goes smoothly within the flow of the story and scenes. Also, I learned new things to this great novel in which made me recommend it to others. Please keep up the amazing work?
I had read quite a few chapters and also played this type of game on phone it.gets very boring after.some time ...so not much to read here plus the updating time interval is way too unstable
If this is anything like Solo Player Arvin then this book is worth giving 5-stars....exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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I'm bad at writing reviews so I'll be honest as possible. The story was intriguing and the author has good writing skills. Aside from the minor mistakes the author made, everything is all set!
If there's something I don't like, it's the anime cliche like opening the bathroom door while there is a girl inside or the FL with the typical anime girl stereotype.