Currently on Chapter 498…
I can confirm that the Romance in this story has a problem.
Not to say that it’s bad writing, but it gets too much sometimes.
The MC is practically raised mostly on his romances.
What I mean is that each girl he dates provides the MC a chance to develop his character, some even going as far as helping him develop his abilities.
There are times when he’s in between relationships, but most of the time he’s in one. And when he’s in a relationship, rarely is there a chapter where he doesn’t do some display of romance (not to mention the number of times they did more than pillow talk to end a chapter).
This is all understandable, as the romance partners become a reason that’s pushing the MC to get stronger, but still… can they not flirt with each other every g*dd*mn chapter!?
Hi Sumer, is it possible to ask for the novel's updated chapter? :'(
Poor doctor Zhou, the author just kept calling him ugly
It's a high ranking novel but translation is just badly edited mtl level and ending is not so good.
Not everything is on the level of SS, unfortunately.
MYGHAD THIS BOOK IS FINALLY HERE I STILL CANT GET OVER WITH IT
Let me get this right... This dongfang whatever run out of house fuck a stud who doesn't care about her for one night and even told her that he will never meet her after that but she was happy netherless but after one month of that one night stand she became pregnant and he doesn't care because he doesn't know too so it's all his fault???? And his child born by her has to suffer it? Humph.......
The only flaw of this kind of novel that hasn't been fixed by those authors is the authors always stuffed their "Blessings" to the MCs without thinking clearly so the MCs couldn't even diggest them properly. Some of the "Blessings" even became the title of a chapter but they disappeared without a trace.
I am so excited to read this book completely
Story overall is super basic with constant writing deveatioms leading to meaningless prose and incessant repeating of lines. Overall the author wants to try to fill up the word count with detail but fails most of the time. Martial Arts theme is cool and all but just not executed that well. Typos almost every paragraph. They range from improper grammar to entirely missing words. If the author were just to read over what he wrote it would easily be an entertaining read. The fact of the matter is the authors lack of editing just leads to the readers becoming unwilling editors themselves. I can confidently predict that if the Author focused any amount on cleaning up simple mistakes the novel could easily become more popular. Unfortunately as it stands the Novel is very close to MACHINE TRANSLATION quality and thus at most will be considered a filler book between people waiting for what they actually enjoy reading.
It's getting annoying when he keeps saying "I'm a student" instead of just admitting "I'm a capital owner" like the capitalist he is
I would have given a complete five stars if the author made more chapters per week. Nothing more to say than just a perfect story. Really needs to be published to hard copy. This story has the potential for so much more and I think the author will provide. Just a nudge to the author, fans aren’t just fans because you give them what they want but because you give them what they need. And we need more chapters!! Lol