Chapter 1 is so disconnected and disjointed from the rest of the chapters.I can't figure out the anything after chapter 1 so maybe create a natural flow ?
as an avid reader of this... i galze this tory so hard cause this story is so peak... peak litetureature so peak i am so peak please consider blglazing this story eaas well thenakyou
I am giving five stars because this is one of the most unique novels that I have read on this app. This book has a great concept that I can't get enough of.
Very promising start! I expect a lot from this book and I'm sure a lot people would enjoy it as well!
it's a funny read, love the concept of the Mandara Lotus and QinLuo being heir not master or servant
I just finished reading Rebirth Of The Mighty Overlord, and it’s really nice. If you’re into epic fantasy, intense battles, and unexpected twists, you should definitely check it out!
This is a great story. I can't stop my self giving it a five star review Quite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed.Plus, the writing style is quite simple and goes in a good flow. Great book and will surely enjoy it
Yes am shameless I like giving my books the best rate?, this is my second book and it's super short but what are your thoughts about the story?.
"So that's how it is, how many months have you felt this problem?"
I sighed and ready to give the answer.
Never! Never! Never!
PaGo said " What can I say I believe in God nad also read quite lot of manga. So, why did you pull me from my world. Did do something wrong." God "No. You did nothing wrong. I was just wondering what to do and I saw you being happy no matter what situation you were so I decided to send you to another world with two abilities of different anime world and with a stat window." PaGo thought to himself ' Ok what should I choose?'