Hey everyone, I'm the author of "Beyond Horizons - The Reincarnation." I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Please leave a review and let me know what you think. When the time comes, I would greatly appreciate your power stones. Enjoy!
This concept has a lot of potential! The opening line about human nature is thought-provoking and sets a dark, introspective tone that fits well with the theme of ambition and madness. The idea of samurai seeking a demon blade to rise to power is intriguing, blending historical elements with supernatural mystery. To make it stronger, consider adding a hint about the blade’s curse or the personal stakes for the samurai. Why does he want to be emperor? Overall, it’s a compelling premise that could explore the price of power and the danger of tampering with forces beyond human control.
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good one don't judge by just reading starting chapters it gets better every chapter slowly and he will soon get more powers then anyone...........
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The link was the tricky part, since it was a design unique to the user. In Tobirama's notes about the technique, it was stated that the link should be a design that represented the user, which his did by being a stylized version of the Senju clan logo, where the logo was cut in the middle and opposing ends met, symbolizing his introvert ideology.
Shito walked to them. He looked up at him and welcomed him. Then, he finally thanked Sasha.
I took another wing and sipped my sprite. Hoseok took the last one, gobbling on it while I took nibble of mine realizing I said too much and looked down, embarrassed, about to apologize before Hoseok cut me off.
"Ahh, adventurers, lovely day isn't it?"
"Will you be my girlfriend?!". Just like that she had said no.
Oh, it's not just her. It's also with the Crown Prince as well. In that picture, she was holding—actually, more on hugging—the Crown Prince which she finds really, really embarrassing.