AuthorofCulture
where can i get it?
Its ongoing, but only on webnovel, the updates here have stopped. Sadly you need to pay for the webnovel one.
Typical Fanboy
Which chapter? I want to help!
Read "Eastern : Level Up with Pills and Herbs" I hope you will enjoy it
I read the first two chapters, and I can tell exactly that the author didn't know how to write a novel. He failed to set the tone of the story, failed to introduce the main character, failed to establish the plot, failed to lay the foundation for world-building. The first chapter, which should have been the most captivating, was wasted on setting up a conspiracy involving characters I don't know and don't care about, as the author never gave me a chance to know or bond with them.
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At first, I thought it was just a short prologue. I expected the author to circle back and set up the plot after it ended. However, that wasn't the case, he simply ignored all of it. After reached chapter 19 without a single hint of plot, I decided to drop it.
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Sometimes it's just so obvious that the author doesn't know how to write. He may or may not have a good story in his head, but without writing skill, it's all useless.
Im at chapter 199 and finally its going toward real XXX . very good
Is it worth it? I am hesitant to start it as there are no stakes. The introduction feels like a Korean drama. Any thoughts? The Legendary Mechanic and THE SECOND COMING OF GLUTTONY are top for me, and I am searching for something in that range.
Chapter 600: Despite an intriguing concept, the novel disappoints in its execution. The slow pacing, inconsistent character portrayal, poor resource management, and unresolved, dragged-out family subplots detract from the overall enjoyment. Exaggerated conflicts further undermine the story. While I hope future chapters improve to fulfill the story’s potential, it doesn't seem likely.
Most readers don't seem to mind these issues, while others have dropped the novel early on, which I don't blame them for. There are occasional great plots, but they are often ruined by illogical decisions made by the main character, followed by poor excuses.
I still recommend trying it if you don’t mind the small details just don’t expect it to be perfect
ThisNovel has 2000 plus chapters.
Guys, why is the update slow? Is it always like this?
Another one I don't get about this novel is when you strike a shield rebound force throws you backwards in opposite direction so HOW CAN YOU USE REBOUND FORCE TO STRIKE IN SAME DIRECTION FOR STABBING ENEMY'S NECK. Author your basic understanding of FORCE Laws sucks for me.
