A very fun read! Reminds me of this other novel in the site, Adjudicator of Death, was it? Point being, both MCs have a system, are geniuses (yes they dont rely on luck to win) and outsmart the government/police everytime.Definitely should give it a read!
The concept for this story is cool but the execution just wasn't there sadly. It started out fine which minor errors in grammar but negligible. Unfortunately the relationships weren't fleshed out at all and felt forced from the start. Also the idea that the MC's gun has a mildly infuriating personality while having access to his inner thoughts irked me to no small degree. I just wish the relationships were done a little better.
es una muy buena historia los personajes están muy buen diseñados la trama de la historia es muy fluida y atendible pero la historia avanza muy rápido por lo demás vale la pena leerlo
The plot and story line seems rather interesting and refreshing, since the book is all about a "Mage with a system". Author has done a great job in creating relatable characters and story arcs. There was something so attractive and intriguing about the story that kept me hooked. When it comes to world build-up and detailing, author has outdone his previous works ??? Looking forward to read more about Vincent's journey to become a great mage as well as a super Villain ?
very nice to read. Updates nerar every day ...
Great novel with great potential!!!I am hooked already. Be sure to check it out. It has good development, an interesting and fresh plot, and I'm looking forward to seeing how far the novel can go.
really enjoyed this one. can't wait for it to be updated again!
This book is scary. The entire book has a premise: we have a character within a setting. However the author describes the scenario too lazily to talk about irrelevant techniques and irrelevant villains. The truth is, there is no scenario, it's just a demonic fantasy and he's in cultivation detour. A tragedy without a doubt.
Little grammer problem. But its very good so for everyone who is afraid that this will be another chinese cliche novel its not . it might have the elements but its far from it its amazing. The begining it might be disliked but there is a reason for. All characters have their own life, and personality. NO AWE over MC. The seniors respect the younger peoples choice. And xia Yu I am looking forward her character development.
Sad. An interesting ability, an interesting MC, but everything else feels bland. You won't feel implicated in the story. Author has wasted a good setting with this book.
lololol love it but i wonder if it well be selected
This novel is definitely a page turner! The way the author paints a picture in our minds is absolutely amazing. I was able to imagine everything perfectly. This story is written perfectly and is definitely a must read!