good book author hope you continue................................................................................................................................
With the release of the sixth chapter, is this preview already over? Or will you continue to post this story here? Either way, I love all your works and this easily shot up to my favorite.
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I’m confused about the lack of 1 stars, does author just remove reviews?
Fatal flaws of this novel
-Author bastardizes the narrative. Alot of the ideas are good but a lot are too drawn out, too skipped, and author LOVES lying as the narrator. Also the writing of the novel is like the author picking the writing style he likes from 1000 different novels and applying it to a certain specific paragraph each time. Author has no consistent style. Am I getting Japanese Beta MC or Xianxia ruthless psycho this chapter? I don’t know!
-The amount of times MC bulges his eyes each chapter. Author must have a kink for bulging eyes.
-The amount of people who stutter. A trained assassin stuttering one word? Mc stutters a lot too.
-The collosal amount of CRINGE.
-The amount of chapters wasted for useless events. Why would they even steal food for WHAT?
-Author doesnt build on how to do spells. No explanation just heres a fireball.
These MMORPG type novels are a good innovation and great ideas for the future generations to imply on. These are indirectly making the future bright by larady foreshadowing the events
A book involves Starsigns and other things integrated with fantasys elements and system. I believe with time and more chapters. It would be in a good level and position to read.
Nice work Writing isn't easy And let be frank am the author, I'm reviewing my book by myself because I know what it's take to bring up and idea and write.Please drop your frank reviews about this story as we continue writing.Thank you
The idea is nice but unfortunately it feels like you are reading the essay of a grade school kid. The grammar is … well non existent.
I give a perfect score to writing quality and as for stability of updates, I'll give it a four. Story development is going well so far, the world background was written well while the MC is interesting and well written. Life-like, I must say. As for other characters, I can't judge them that well yet. Overall, this is a good read.
I am completely fascinated by the story specially the author descriptive of surrounding and the world setting keep up the good work .The story plot is one more redeeming point which O liked the most
I am looking forward to GD's new novel. The author is one of the best authors I know, so readers you won't be disappointed when it comes to writing style and grammar. I look forward to the partnership between Leo and Morgana. Not sure if I should wish for Morgana's success but definitely look forward to how Leo gets himself out of death.
I'm only to chapter 220 so im not reading comments to avoid spoilers. Just wanted to say how much i love this book i can't wait to get back to reading. Thank you so much author for sharing this world with us.