Please update :DD
This heroine...no backbone whatsoever....so disappointing...and the hero!! Good God just who the h*'ll shaped your sense of romance and character development, author? Someone sends a text from FL's phone, everyone clearly knows she didn't do it, but because it came from HER phone she is fine taking the blame and responsibility for it? Are you a door mat or just incurably stupid? I don't care how nice of a person you are, no one is dumb enough to do something like that. This story is fairly decent except for the fact that your leads are getting less and less appealing as things play out....
To be honest I don't like a novel with system existing, but this one is an exception. I love this stories
I would say it's a fun read but that's about it There is almost no such thing as a balance of power.mc has a god-like ability in the beginning and it's so pointless.I can't even understand what it has to fight against in the future when mv has such an advantage.Even in my dreams, I wouldn't find such an extreme corrupt talent start plausible.Unfortunately, there is nothing to look at from an objective point of view.
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im in chapter 31 i just want to say it's fucking good but is this complete or hiatus or drop? because why there's no update for 3 months?
For a "modern" story, the world this takes place in is still future dystopian. The world building is somewhat there, but it seems that organized crime is the true government in all the cities. The focus on the MC has distracted from better character development of any of the peripheral characters leaving the story to feel unbalanced. This could get better over time. I've really enjoyed MVS and think it had better direction and focus from the start. This story needs more of both.
5 Stars! This is has got to be one one of the best novels I've read! In fact it's so good that I actually decided to leave a review. I haven't left an actual review in around a year(not including exp reviews). Anyways it's super good. I personally love just about any story about Necromancers or Skeletons or Necromancer Skeletons. The MC is a cool skeleton necromancer dude, and his character is built super well. It's a tiny bit repetitive in the beginning, it has the usual "you killed this" " you leveled up" "you killed this" "you leveled up". But it gets better as your progress. The Author does a good job writing the fight scenes as well describing the environment and characters. As you get in the MC encounters civilization and is able to blend in and hide his his strength. This is also something I quit enjoy. I love reading about the cool, strong, mc's belding in with society and deceiving people. I'm not entirely sure about the consistency of updates, I just started reading this tonight, but the description says the Author updates 2-3 times a week. So based on that I'd say the updates are consistent. Additionally the chapters word count is in the 2,000's to 3,000's, so waiting a few days is worth it. It goes premium at chapter 47, but it's definitely worth using fast passes to keep reading. You can read 2 chapters ahead if you have the app (I don't). As I said the character design is done really good you can really connect with the mc in a way. Most of the MC's pre-reincarnation is hidden(as of right now), but it adds a certain sense of mystery to the MC. The World Background is also done stupendously. The Authors created his own fantasy world and has a done a good job introducing it. There's a chapter that introduces a lot of the background and the history of the world. One of the languages is a lost language called Germanium(I think I spelt that wrong), the author said it isn't German, but I refuse to believe that!The writing quality and the grammar is good, I haven't noticed any misspelled things, run-on sentences, punctuation errors. I think a reason for the updates times, is that the Author spends a lot of time going over and revises and fixing any mistakes. Additionally he gets feedback from the readers that helps him fix any mistakes. I can't really rate this area to well, as I'm German and English is a second language for me. But at least on my standards the grammar and just overall writing quality is awesome.All in all it's a super good story and I definitely would recommend reading.
So far the story has been great, only one thing is the problem. Grammar, although the Novel is readable and very enjoyable, some words are added were they don't belong, some are taken away and a few sentences are written in an order that makes it sound bad. It also misses a lot of punctuations but that's really it..Example:"Months ago emperor of thousand sword kingdom, Nathan Jackson was attacked in a distance land. On the same day killers were sent for the loyal supporters of emperor." Although readable it is hard to read since it is missing a few punctuations. That is my only issue, everything else is just great! Love it! Keep it up!
...I like the book...
Another face-slap inducing arrogant young master and the whole sect calling him trash or garbage but I digress if it does end up different so im keeping hopes to a bare minimum .
Hehehehehehehehehhehehe any romance in this one?