This is an interesting read, and it got me hooked. You are very good with dialogues, and I like how the story progressed. I'd like to read more of this, and I hope you update soon.
Ray is HUMAN!He makes mistakes and manages to grow through them. I really hope you stick around and make it through the muddy areas.It gets so much better. Also, I thank everyone that managed to drop a review and appreciate the fact that you're reading it but please get a little further before you do so.I need more in-depth reviews✌?Keep it coming.
Although I haven't read too much of the story, I hope the mc doesn't lose his kingdom or something of the sort later on. Its just so cliched now, the weak to strong stories.
I just found this and have been binge reading this and am on chapter 108.I have to ask, though I noticed that it hasn't been updated in almost a month. Is the author still updating?
I like this novel so far, it’s really good!!!!!!!! I hate that we need to write 140 o4 something characters ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
Its a Good story but need more depth in the story and for each character and the world in itself and u could make some fillers with Side Quests im no writer so i can only give some small advice ???????????????????????????????????
I'm going to give it all 5☆ because this is my best friend's novel and I have some spoilers for all of ya lads if ya'all wanna know and he's OK then. ........oh oh oh. Beside he created this story for fun and discuss some future development so hang on with him and me a.... I mean with us
It's starting to get interesting, but the updates are too little, need more chapters! Also would appreciate a smexy cover page, it would boost ratings if done well and attract more readers. Potentially good novel and the whole protagonist smiting theme is great! Rob the pu$$ies from the damn protagonists and make harem plz!
At first, I don't want to read this cuz I thought it may be similar to 'Library of Heaven's Path'. The mc there can see everything's weaknesses so yeah, you get what I mean. But good thing, I decided to read this book and boy, I was wrong. There's no way, this and that are similar. This has its own way of being fun and interesting to read. I also like that the story didn't start from the first time the mc transmigrated. So, I very like this story and wish to read more chapters ❤️?
interesting
its quite amusing to read this and can relieve stress.Okay Keep up the good Work and the please update.????????????????????