I don't recommend this novel, the story is all about war, and it's so boring. You can count on your fingers how many times the female lead and male lead have their love interactions. I don't know if I should call it love when I'm at 1200 chapters, and they still haven't even kissed. ? It's not worth reading, but if you're into war stories, go ahead and take a risk. ?
what chapter does he find his wife? if anyone knows please tell me
Great novel ... Finally a villain in a VILLAIN novel acting like a real villain..... Not some soft MCs.... This MC is cunning ... Even taking all heroines he uses evil methods...and then manipulate them ????Suggestions: just need to give few 0P moments to heroines especially Su Xian she is the best girl plus main wife. ... She needs some smoke(actions). ... .Maybe few chaps for heroines POV ,how they r going with each other. Some of their conversations......A daughter of luck
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It's perfect maybe if you add over protected brother that will be more fun hehehe ????????????????????????????????????????????????
F*cking love the story and being able to wake up every day to read a chapter. Has a ton of awesome stuff and I recommend it to all those who come by!
The idea is not bad at all. The biggest problem I have with this is writing quality (grammar and such, that's why I only put 3 stars for writing quality). Some sentences are completely incoherent. Author, you really need editor to check and fix your text (it seems you're not native English speaker).I could help, but it's not my native language as well, so you'd better ask/look for someone anyway.
Just another shameless Author rating their book 5 stars. it's my first public work. I know it isn't the best, but I hope that it will get better as my experience and confidence grows!
A really simple and light read, since this is a slice of life. The cover is cute and the synopsis is modest. It features the everyday school life of each of the characters which is typical in a slice of life genre. nice!
How intense the revenge fire is! It's the one that keeps on growing with each second and never leave the person with satisfaction. In the story, the revenge fire burning in some hearts compel them to take dreadful actions. Share your precious opinion about which character's revenge story is interesting and what you did if you were at his place?
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader I got sunk in this world the author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read :)