The thing that captured my heart is the intricate world-building, the deep, multidimensional characters, and the brilliantly designed system. You can feel the author’s passion and hard work poured into every detail. Trust me, this story is worth every moment of your time. Give it a shot—it’s a ride you won’t regret!
This book was such a gripping read!! I found it to be very well paced and every couple of paragraphs left me with an urge to keep reading. I also really appreciate how the ending entails a smooth foreshadowing of the next book- can't wait to see how it plays out. Plus, the writing style reminded me of one of our favourite series- if you know you know ;) . Overall, it was an amazing story that I thoroughly enjoyed!!
I love this. The comedy has a natural element to it that's great. OP splurging that's a wonderful idea. Keep up the great work man
It has few chapters and the story itself is vague for now, but its surely holds your attention and grows your interest. I love magic, even more I love a good sarcastic humor, and this novel has both. So if you it, please give it a try, it will be worth!
How dark is this story?
till now the story is good and i think the author knows what he's doing plus bro is the man of culture so i think people should definitely give it a try
Absolutely fantastic novel. Amazing plot, amazing smut, amazing everything. Definitely my top smut novel ever, and one of the top 10 novels plot-wise! Keep up the amazing work, Author!
men i love your work especially the build up for the scenes honestly a bit slow with the updates but i get it keep up the good work awesome work 100/10 will definitely recommend it ?
Hey author, amazing novel man, it's just that you are adding too many names for me to remember and focus on the novel. But overall, I like the novel.
Hello shameless author here. Its my first novel out there so i will give it 5 stars, first of all thank you for reading my novel. I know this maybe sudden but i have only 1 rule and its there will be no harem. We will be loyal. Other than that there will be "things" that i think you (readers) will like.
Absolute peak. Read it this instant. You, yes you. Read it. Now.
I loved TGV(the author's previous work).Sure, many took it as NTR coz they had 0 braincells fueling their brain, many had problems with other parts of the story, but to me, the story itself was a masterpiece.What brought TGV down was the instable update rate, and the subpar writing quality.So yeah, I openly blame the author for ruining my experience with TGV.I was apprehensive to start this, worrying it would just be a repeat of TGV. Well, partly, no.The updates are stable(tho it doesn't say much since there are only 15 chapters out rn), and the writing has improved.What is a problem however, is the POV. The novel is written in 3rd person POV, since a majority of WN seems to dislike 1st person POV for some incomprehensible reason, this works in the favor of readers.However, the author decides to use first person pronouns like 'my' more often than not while narrating. It may seem like a minor issue, but while reading, a sudden disparage in the POV like this can be extremely immersion breaking.That aside, the story itself, along with the characters is very good. There isn't much to say seeing as how there aren't much chapters out yet, all I have to say is that give this story at least 7 chapters before you decide whether to continue or drop. The intro is done by that part, and you will get an idea of what to expect going forward.Since this novel managed to pick my interest, I will be looking forward to reading more of it while hoping the author doesn't mess up again. And hey, imo, the story is worth the chances.