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well here is my take this novel is very good and very entertaining to read, i got to chapter 200 however the romance with moonie has kinda ruined it for me it felt forced and now knowing that this is not Harem so the chance of him ending with nico, it just feels bad man :(
I must say i am impressed. it is well written and i am interested how the story will progress. I wish you will continue this story!
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En tant que Championne, Morgane remet au Dresseur l'ayant vaincue le Badge Marais, le sixième des huit Badges officiels de la région de Kanto permettant d'aller affronter le Conseil 4 sur le Plateau Indigo. Elle est aussi Championne du Tournoi Expert Psy et actrice du Pokéwood dans Pokémon Noir 2 et Blanc 2 jouant le rôle de Jujube, la reine des sortilèges du royaume magique. Dans Pokémon Rouge, Bleu et Jaune et leurs remakes, elle porte une combinaison moulante noire et rouge. Dans Pokémon Or HeartGold et Argent SoulSilver et Pokémon Noir 2 et Blanc 2 elle porte un pantalon long blanc, un top rose laissant voir son nombril et deux anneaux au niveau de ses poignets.
Discovering this novel when it was only about 13 chapters was like finding hidden gems. I haven't read a good novel like this in a long time.Looking at the previous reviews, you will know that world-building is the best thing about this novel. VERY INTERESTING World building, unique and enjoyable to follow, makes you want to know more about that world. Probably the best on this platform, in my opinion. Actually, the terms used are still quite mainstream terms, such as dungeons, orc monsters, churches that govern society, and kingdom themes, just like other novels, but HECK, There is something different about this novel from the others, somehow I feel a very strong medieval atmosphere when reading this like almost the same as our medieval world but with magic in the social. I know the author has done some research to create this from reading this.The plot is very well written, my expectations were low, but the author gave his best in the plot. I even cried in some parts (I'm the type of person who does not cry when reading books). The emotion in this story is amazing. Character development is great!!! And everything made sense to me. The relationships between the characters are amazing. Most importantly, this novel has illustrations that make us understand each character better.Great world building, a good plot, and good characters, and there is something different from other novels in this pf. CONS:grammar issue (minor). The author once said that English is not his first language, and so do I. Although I'm not perfect in grammar, I can tell that some of the author's punctuation and storytelling timing are often not good. But it's still in the acceptable stage for me. It's still an enjoyable read. It's just that, for people who really care (or strict!) about grammar, it's better not to read this, I don't really like it when people give low ratings just because of grammar (I know it is important but this wn is still have good grammar)If this author had a good English editor and improved the writing, this novel might be the best on the platform. Despite the flaws, I still give it full stars because I love this wn so much. Currently, in chapter 45, The complexity of the dungeon, the mysterious girl who makes people suicide, the anti govern, the council, the prince, and the church! The story hooked me.
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so till vol 1 i find this novel enjoyable.it is a bit light hearted novel with enjoyable wholesome moments.mc got a nice family and is a prodigy although he likes to take nap too often.update rate is also constant.so all in all a very good novel.
Hi. I'm the author of this story. You can call me Adivonna. I'm an amateur writer. I'm an absolute fan of stories with villainess main characters so I decided to write my own. I hope you enjoy the story.Btw, I pettily gave myself a 5 star rating. He-he' ?
not what you'd expect. both the title and synopsis are basically bait, and only work for the first 10 or so chapters. then things start going out of hand, ridiculous reveals keep happening that we barely understand and before we get explanations, other reveals happen and those before get shoved out of the way and only get some basic explanations if you read between the lines. overall, to enjoy this you must have your brain online (you must think while reading this! no brain-dead reading where you forget things you dont like!), and thus see its faults, which is both a pro and a con for me. still ill give it 5 stars just because how different it is from others of its sort. and remember, dont believe what is "established
I am obviously biased as the author but I believe in my book. Just give it a try, a few minutes of your time is all I ask. Then drop your view on the way out if you're not willing to stay. I appreciate everyone for sticking with me through this trying time.
Don't get invested, he's barely started his other novel and take long and frequent breaks. Wait a few years to build up a stock before reading. Otherwise, it seems as good as his other novel, which despite my joke review, is pretty good.
What can I say? this is a-m-a-z-i-n-g mate. Simply amazing. First of all, I loved the fact that author-nim put character information for the main couple and a couple of villains. It helped me a lot lol. To begin with, I love the theme of the story, involving a villainess who suffers like hell because of the 'saintess', and then she got back in time and change everything. The way author-nim wrote it is amazing like I've said. She knows how to explain her pain, her thoughts, and the personality of the people around her. When Nat got back... bruh it's amazing. I also laughed a lot cuz it's funny. I'm hella anxious to see the male lead cuz I'm freaking out with theories about him out here LOL... also, it's still a new novel, with only a few chapters until now, but in my opinion, it has a very huge potential. I'm looking forward to see where this amazing story will go. Keep it going, author-nim, cupz I'll keep it reading here.
