This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Overall: Great book keep going, the story was interesting to make push through despite the cons, unfortunately it seems to have gone on hiatusOkay, here the cons and some tips (more for improvement rather than anything else):- Use past tense, instead of present.- too much description, that sound robotic- this relates to the last point, but: too much philosophical description, adding some here and there is good, but not every action needs to be described like that (use it rarely and wisely) Exmp: "He held the pill..." not"he held the pill in his hand it's weight signifying his only lifeline in this harsh reality, as it acted as a strong reminder of the cruelty of the world.."This is more of a tip, but I think you should get a better cover (I am happy to help if you don't know how)Anyway, good luck and hopefully you come back soon.
the MC is very smart, he relies on his brain to solve the problems. the story is very good, can't wait for the MC to power up.The magic system is good.
Every book this author makes is mind blowing, you can be teleported into the story with out knowing, this book keeps you in the edge of your seat, check it out because The writing style = checkedThe world development = checkedLovable characters= checkedUpdate stability = checkedthere isn't anything wrong with this book, so do check it out.
This novel is so good and unique than other reborn novel it can be made in to series.
Amazing novel but paywall at 15 makes me depressed and lonely
Admittedly, I didn't like how chapter 1 was written but it got better as the chapters progressed. Main character needs to have more personality. Overall the plot seems interesting and it would be better if slight adjustments were made
I like the story so far, the characters are very likable and such. It does get pretty violent near the end (volume 2 I think), and it made me feel like crap, but otherwise it's pretty good. there are still things that haven't been clarified yet though, and I'm not sure if I have just forgotten, or the author hasn't mentioned it yet. The side stories do get somewhat annoying at times though and I fail to get attached to the characters
Just started reading but will give it a try
The plotline of the story is quite interesting and the fact that she's taking revenge from her father is even more intriguing tbh. Can't wait to find out how she manages to do it and if she succeeds or not ^.^ 100% recommended!
Hey, I just have one question for the writer if you don’t mind when do you plan or suspect the story will be finished? Like how many chapters do you think the story will have?
good book recommended one must read this book