wow!!!what a novel! Your plot is simply wonderful. The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more.clap for your author.keep up the good work.I would keep reading.
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With how quick the timeskips are along with the teaching and system, it kind of reminds me of "Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate For a Thousand Years".At first I was kind of disappointed by the slow speed of his cultivation but as you read further, you can understand that his cultivation style is vastly superior than the world he's in, like in one instance from what one of his visitors explained, he managed to guess that someone who has Xiantian level cultivation is only equivalent to the 7th level of Qi refinement. And in another it's explained that one can only fly when they are in the Immortal realm, but mc stated that he could already fly when he was in the 3rd or 4th level of qi refinement.
I enjoyed the storyline of the novel so far and find it promising, but it's difficult for me to provide a thorough evaluation at this point since there are only a few chapters available. Nonetheless, I encourage the author to continue with this work as I am enjoying it so far.
It is an interesting story to read. There are often updates so you can continuing reading. But sadly there are a few grammatical mistakes in the text. The mistakes mostly don't matter but some make it difficult to understand the text. But all in all it is really good.
Mc has a system yes and the reason for the 'video game' tag is because apparently the author views the MC's life as a video game due the system.(Weird but okay)I have read 9 chapters but I wanted to share my opinion, so the world background I really can't tell anything but from what I read is that mc resides in a fantasy world with goblins and a burning boar?Also mc is a grasshopper that lost his memories from his past life and only can remember general knowledge. The higher level he is the more he will recall from his previous life.Story development is your usual level up and become stronger. Currently the mc is just surviving as a tiny grasshopper.Character design is a bit weird in my opinion. The way the story is told looks like the mc forgot everything, but he isn't. So you get sort of a vague feeling... It's not really in the way of your reading experience so dont worry.SoU: 5* - as alwaysTranslation Quality: 4.5 stars. There are minor instances of wrong names placed or commas. But I only saw 2 - 3 in 9 chapters and is barely noticeable.All in all, give it a try. I will first read 39 chapters before I go to my next novel!
A simple yet engaging read. The story flows well and the dialogue between characters is crafted nicely, in addition to the believable atmosphere that surrounds these characters. You can feel what they're going through.
kakakaka. I like such novels which go back in time and rebirthsWaiting for more chapters................................................................
keep it up good work author ........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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So far the story seems very enjoyable. There are a lot of interesting ideas, but the writing quality and the details throughout the story need a bit fleshing out. I feel like this can potentially become a very good novel. :)Actually, I'm interested in giving feedback and editing your chapters before release.Contact me if you are interested. ??