This novel was the very first novel I read
I feel this had a lot of potential but it shouldn’t have taken the harem path
nice water train like in One Piece(water 7) but using magic
Please update soon
I don't understand the sypnosis. Marquis Kieran Vale, is what? A woman?
Nice potential, Author keep writing and don't you dare stop
Finally back, I thought you dropped the novel, came back better in every aspect, keep it going!!
now gotta fill with random words, good novel tho ;)
Heys been reading for a while , and really not expected to like it much due to realism , as i generally prefer more fiction with magic reincarnation system , you know what I am talking about , but yeah it got me hooked
So long as this doesn't go super harem route it has a chance of being good.
Empezó bien la novela, sin embargo de un momento a otro empeora todo, en primera todas son mujeres casadas o al menos la mayoría de las que sale en la historia, luego el MC tiene un fetiche asqueroso respecto a las axilas, está bien decir que te gusta algo así pero el autor lo exagera mostrando a cada rato una escena con axilas, simplente ésto es algo que empezó bien para después empeorar, pero aún así gracias por la lectura
Man I love this story but the way you write, it's just too uptight, I mean who talk to an enemy with that level of elegance, it's like you are writing a play for opera or something, and there is that sentence that comes again and again "thrilled to explore this new world and experience everything it has to offer." this sentence is almost every chapter before c85 and sometimes it is more than one time in a chapter, and there is this sentence or line that you right in every new paragraph "there heart filled with anticipation and thriller for what to come" I mean come on man don't be so uptight. And don't try too much. The story is good and has way more potential than what you are presenting and please if possible change that uptight writing style. I hope this novel will become one of the best on the platform.
I find the story very touching and appreciate the author's portrayal of the character. The way the chapters end, leaving you with a sense of curiosity and a desire to know what will happen next, is indeed an excellent storytelling technique. It creates anticipation and keeps the reader engaged. Keep up. The good work there is some punctuation mistake but they can be fixed.