Solid story, a dungeon delve that seems like it will go on for awhile. Excited for how the class system might work.
Ok, this.... this is a first ? nice ? keep up the good work!!
I love this story, it’s worth reading Review Template for an Excellent Story“This story is a masterpiece that captivates from the very first word to the final sentence. The plot is intricately woven, balancing moments of tension, emotion, and surprise with remarkable finesse. The characters are deeply relatable, with their arcs unfolding naturally and leaving a lasting impression.The writing is vivid and immersive, painting scenes so clearly that you feel transported into the world the author has created. Every detail feels intentional, enhancing the story’s atmosphere and depth without ever overwhelming the reader This is storytelling at its finest—a perfect blend of creativity, skill, and heart. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for a truly unforgettable reading experience
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I so much love your book Salvy Queen and your characters designs are extraordinary. But some of the names are being written in Chinese maybe you can amen that. xoxo
Not much to write a review upon but I like it already keep up the good work. ??
Take this with a grain of salt, and see this as constructive criticism.As a first time reader you can’t really take the words of an author at face value when they say it’s worth it or not when comes with their work.You can’t really expect an reader who barely read enough of MC (due to the heavy amount of filter in the early stages of the book) to spend their own money to unlock chapters. who knows weather or not its worth it. Based on the little amount of screen time the MC has before the paywall, I don’t think it’s worth it to continue reading due to problem of information or lack thereof.Honestly seems like story more revolving around the Elf guy than the official MC, based on how he has all the basic qualities of a MC (insanely talented, transmigrated from Earth, creator of a system, etc etc) and everyone singing praises about him. Look there as to be a reason why although it has well over a thousand chapters it’s so low on the ratings, it could be good for all I know, but the beginning ain’t what you wanna see on a top rated book.Side note: You gotta delete those useless chapters, you are already limiting the amount of chapters you have to read, why do it more?
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"I-ii yeah i can.."
"Ohhh, and what news might that be?" Kuroka asked as she yawned and sat up properly.
The attacks were faster and heavier, but they were not well calculated. She was just randomly attacking, much worse than she was before.
Jordan rolled her eyes. "Fine."