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This book is awesome. It hasnt disappointed me at all. I cant wait to see what the author does to give the MC more powers and maybe more elements to use. But the biggest thing is that if you comment at tue end of the chapter and its relevant then the author will take ot into consideration with I think is one 9f the best things in an author because it shows they care and r trying there best to incorporate what u say to make the story better. keep up the great work!!!

Overall, the writing is solid. My issue is the unnecessary dragging of the most:the fl’s identity as an heiress of the wealthiest family. I read up until the 600th chapter, and the weak villains still exist. What’s the point of having money, power, and influence when she allows the roaches (a family that doesn’t even rank on the third tier, according to the novel) to continue with their low-level schemes?

Honestly I’ve read the book till chapter 410 because it’s interesting but it’s a major slow read no one has moved forward for example FL and ML still are in the same place and the evil step sister and family and the others they are left still so what I’m saying it’s dragging on way to much I have spend a lot of money on this book so far and will not continue
Good luck it has a great storyline but after reading 410 nothing has been moved forward still the same plot of crazy step sister and if the FL and ML are supposed to be strong and powerful but I don’t see that

This is my personal opinion so don't take offense in any way.
The beginning of the story was nice to read and had some mystery to it because of the magic.
But now it's about politics and side characters. The Mc doesn't use all his resources efficiently despite having an ai, like using his money or threatening the government with Gaia os.
The writing style is OK but in some chapters very boring as it's only an explanation of how he builds or creates things. Dunno if the author just wants to flex his knowledge or just waste our time as it doesn't have any relevance to the story itself and it's not in depth enough to truly learn something important.
The character is just some standard character. Nice to his family and friends, naive and an idiot and genius at the same time. He majored in engeneering I guess but discusses with his ai how to run an enterprise out of nothing. While he does have a better brain the knowledge just appeared.
Few trustworthy friends, family and employees around him.
The world background seems to be normal  world around 2013.
It's readable but at some point it gets boring as only side characters are mentioned. Mc doing a random task like stealing knowledge.
So final evaluation : the Mc is stupid and naive despite having a far better brain.
Author writes too much useless stuff like those explanations and mentions those side characters too often.
To be honest I expected more action with cyborgs or Hacking.

It's a pretty good read. Far better than most trial novels that get picked up. Although pretty generic with nothing new, it offers pretty decent quality. My only nitpick is that webnovel started to split 1 chapter into 3 mini chapters and then they increased it to 5-7 mini chapters. The best thing to do is to not use your coins to unlock chapters cause you're just getting scammed when 5-7 chapters are really just 1 chapter.

Starts off pretty well, then the pop culture references start seeping in but the MC is a transmigrator and clearly one of us because videogame, film, anime, etc, references are pretty much all he brought with him to his new world. But then... then the pop culture references start worming their way into the world background and lore. From details remarkably similar to other web novels to plot points pulled from HBO shows, and the names that get used. Well, to put it plainly this now seems less like a transmigrator story and more like the story of a culture junkie who got hit by a truck and we're now reading his coma dream. I guess its personal preference, but when MC makes a Witcher reference because he played the game, I'm cool with that. But when Ice Queen Elsa's kingdom is dealing with an invasion of White Walkers in the North, that's too much to treat seriously.

I initially thought this was gonna be a novel where MC is a hermit that drinks pure spiritual blessed water casually then blows the minds of mortals as he casually serves it to them. On the contrary, this seems like an actual cultivation novel. He actually sequesters himself to cultivate or practice his skills/spells to mastery stages ect. This isn't a novel where the system is overbearing or seems to be constantly present either. It sometimes pops in to give a mission then leaves for a couple years or something. Characters are also one of this novels strong points, with them behaving as real actual humans would instead of being cardboard cutouts of that same arrogant young master.

Not what I was expecting honestly, but seems to be very well done and has that rare quality where some actual thought seems to be put in by the author.

You know, it's really disappointing when a promising story takes a nosedive into a cesspool of bigotry and an unhealthy obsession with blood relations. The initial chapters showed potential, but then it's like the author couldn't resist drowning the narrative in sexism and this bizarre blood fixation.

Suddenly, 'blood' relatives are put on this pedestal, while the genuinely interesting 'non-blood' relationships are left in the dust. The main character's sudden favoritism towards 'blood' kin is both frustrating and off-putting. It's like the author forgot how to create meaningful connections beyond some arbitrary genetic link.

What's worse is how this skewed perspective bleeds into the MC's actions. If you're not part of the 'blood' club, you're automatically relegated to the role of an outsider. Loyalty and support from non-blood companions are met with mistrust and scheming, which is incredibly jarring and makes it difficult to invest in the characters.

The first 120 or so chapters were tolerable, but then the author went full-throttle on this 'blood' fixation, and it felt like a slap in the face for readers who were hoping for a more nuanced and inclusive narrative. It's a shame when an otherwise potentially enjoyable novel gets overshadowed by such regressive themes.

This book is average at best.

The pros :

- The translation is ok

- The characters are interesting

- The interactions are entertaining

The pros :

- The chapters are too short.
Each chapter is so short that it feels like nothing substential happens in the story.

- The story is too long.
Seriously? 1100 + chapters and the book is still ongoing?
A slice of life with over 100 chapters is - most of the time - boring in the long run.
And it's the case here. So many unnecessary events( confrontations with the neighbours and other people) stretch the story . Plus, it becomes quickly repetitive.


- The antagonists.
They are too stupid. It's like aside from the Mc's family( counting the Ml as part of the family too), everyone is stupid.
This isn’t entertaining at all, as they serve to make the Mc glow up.

The ml is also a problem. He is ypur usual ice block. And even by 100~ chapters, we don't know about his motivations for marrying the Mc , and he seems to not have any personality aside from being cold and domeenering.


-  The pace is slow.
As i said , by 100+ chapters , the story is still in it's early stages and this just feels like things  are evolving at a snail's speed.

All in all , this is your average chinese novel about reincarnation in the 19s.
This book doesn't deserves that we  spend coins on it.

I know it's still a bit too early to write a review, but I just had to nevertheless, because this novel is straight out the twin to "Treasure Hunt Tycoon" with all the racism and the MC's ability to find treasures among junk and roaming around people with lack of a moral compass. I more or less enjoyed "THT", despite all the racism and the discrimination, thus I'm looking forward to this one.

So…I’m on the 17th chapter and while the story’s been great so far, it hasn’t warranted the 5* review I’m currently giving.

What warrants this 5* review is my pity towards the author for having to deal with so many readers that don’t pay attention. As I said, I am on chapter 17 and I’ve lost count how many times people have attempted to fix the author’s “errors” for things they didn’t pay attention to. There have been explanations to all stat changes, or lack there of yet these readers constantly believe they know what they are talking about which then leads to further confusion as other readers begin to believe what they say.

Sorry author, story’s great and I have plans on catching up, hope you the best.

This novel is... Not great. The grammar Is so painfully bad that I can’t actually read anymore. Mistakes here and there are fine, but literally every sentence takes me out of it. Please if you write a book at least use grammarly or something. Also the writing has been... bad. Often times the author skips foreshadowing and straight up says “something is going to happen” before it happens and without foreshadowing. Its absolutely frustrating.