This is the first story I've encountered with such storytelling, and I'm unsure if it's due to the writing style or the plot itself, but I find myself eager to move on to the next chapter after reading each one (luckily, I finished it before getting hooked). My overall impression is 4.1, but I'll boost the rating to 5 to support the story.
The title, "The Slag Gong," hints at the premise: the husband (H) wants to kill me, and I attempt to retaliate by meticulously planning his slow murder. The title also subtly reveals the motive: H's infidelity with his childhood friend (CS).
While the MC's meticulous planning for the crime, from creating an illusion to executing the details, is impressively crafted for a fictional narrative, it's impractical for real life, unfortunately. Here are some aspects that seem questionable or unrealistic:
1. If CS truly planned to kill H, they wouldn't schedule a medicine delivery at their own house on the same day as the murder, especially if they were going out with H. If it was intentional, they wouldn't leave the package unattended. If it was accidental, it's odd for the courier to leave a package unclaimed.
2. The presence of a knife in a bedroom raises eyebrows. Detectives would likely focus on it as a murder weapon, not the locked door. The logic behind eating the body seems implausible, regardless of the circumstances.
3. Saving highly relevant information in a hidden folder of a laptop is suspicious. It's unlikely someone would store everyday text conversations there, especially if they're concerned about privacy.
Despite these issues, there are redeeming qualities in the story:
1. The author's misdirection with a lockroom murder instead of a medical one adds depth, as it cleverly implicates the MC while revealing the husband's knowledge gap.
2. The revelation of an unseen accomplice in the epilogue is a delightful twist, as it expands the complexity of the plot and adds an element of surprise.
However, one aspect that continues to bother me is the identity of Ji Qu, which remains unclear until the epilogue:
1. As Editor B, it's logical for them to be involved, given their love for MC, but their connection to CS and their ability to influence others are unclear.
2. If Ji Qu is the Film Emperor, their past with CS and Elder Brother-in-Law's reaction don't quite fit with their supposed timeline and fame.
I'm still puzzled by this mystery, but overall, the story is captivating and worth recommending. The epilogue, however, feels like a déjà vu from "Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint," which detracts from the experience.