The dialogue in this section is genuinely excellent and I want to highlight why. Each character has a completely distinct voice and you never have to look at the name tag to know who's speaking. Zhao Cuilan's lines are all urgency and warmth - 'Xiaoyin girl, as long as you can cure Songzhi's leg, I will work like an ox or a horse for you.' That's a mother's voice. Desperate, loving, slightly dramatic. Then you have Su Xiaoyin's voice which is this perfect blend of practical and playful - she winks at Yuan Songzhi when she hands him the ginseng, she says 'Auntie, how could I let you work like an ox or a horse? I just want to eat your cooking.' She's deflecting the emotional weight with humor, which is so character-accurate. And Yuan Songzhi? His dialogue is sparse but loaded. 'Then I will trouble Comrade Su from now on.' That's it. That's the whole sentence. But it carries so much. He's acknowledging her sacrifice, accepting her terms, and silently committing to reciprocate. Minimalist to the point of poetry. Meanwhile Lin Tianyang's internal monologue reads like a villain's spreadsheet - 'who, when given the chance, would not want to climb higher?' The author's narrative voice also shifts tone depending on whose perspective we're following. When we're with Su Xiaoyin at the Yuan house, it's warm and domestic. When we're with Lin Tianyang, it's cold and calculating. This is how you write dialogue that serves character, not just plot.