Nero with the burning flames

My second review for this story.I don't know why I'm still reading this. I could handle the poor grammar but the amount of times I've seen the wrong names used is astounding.But to be fair the names can very well be interchangeable, they are mostly interchangeable. Its hard to comprehend the love interest here, he met Rachael, Sarah's sister, once before she fell for him. Jill or either of the twins would have made a better pairing.I don't know how much more I will read of this.The romance tag is an afterthought, MC while he gets stronger he's constantly bellow the bar. What you would think is foreshadowing is just forgotten plots points.

Well, It was a good story, characters were interesting and altogether it kept me interested. It' a pity, in fact, that this book seem dropped.

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overall i really like this book, the world building and story progression is good, and it is one of the few web novels with systems that are actually good, the system isn't bratty or smug and does its job when it needs to. The protagonist too is good, he feels like a person that can actually exist and have overall good personality. So in conclusion give this story a try, its some of the few good ones in this site (i am writing this review to motivate the author as i am genuinely hooked up to the story and don't want this to be dropped) (sry for my english, its not my first language)

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