My Supreme Lord System : Obey Your Lord - Reviews

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I normally LOVE criticizing novels! Hell, there was a time I was criticized for being too harsh to the authors due to my critiques!But hell if I don't love this story …A BEAUTIFUL execution of a new premise in a story, no overused reincarnation/transmigration/back-in-time or anything of the sort. A child inheriting his grandfather's empire while having to fight for his rights with his other family members (father, mother, brothers) be it in real life or in a VR game.I normally write reviews either due to disappointment (unfortunately, on this site, this is the most prevalent review one can expect from) or potential of the story (normally due to writing quality being really bad, but its premise being way too great to ignore).Guess what, this story falls under NEITHER.It's got AWESOME characters, world background and story development (at least for now) and stability of updates seems to be on a daily release (again, for now).Writing quality is also really nice; it has nicely split paragraphs and very good sentences' structures. Rich enough vocabulary and grammar is pretty nice.The only critique the author still has to work on (for now) is proper tenses usage. He messes them up from time to time, but it is NOWHERE NEAR the mix-up most other novels on this site have. Unfortunately, due to me being me, that still warrants one less star on `Writing Quality`, making it a total of 4.Other than that? It's 5 star for now! Making the overall rating a 4.8.Cheers.

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I've read the raw (which is really good) on Qidian. I might be wrong but I'm pretty sure that 'filial piety' was used instead of 'debauched devotion'. But overall this is a really good read.

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Writing quality is alright Updating stability is great!Story development is very ehh the novel goes way to fast and I don’t mean in terms of chapter I mean in the time frame the novel is set on The first week he manages to do way to much. It should have taken him atleast a few months Ex: Charlotte and MC relationship turns romantic in the same day they met that isn’t realstic it should have been spread through atleast 1 month in novel time so the relationships can develop In a week he managed to befriend the daughter of the USA President conquer a sword trail get a power that isn’t from this universe, survive a elevator malfunction and fought a monster I feel the time frame is just in unrealsticAnother issue is his attempt to get the instructor to teach him, him apparently being the lord and then getting caught but he somehow gets away from it cause of a misunderstanding that doesn’t make sense anybody would know he was lying Character design is alright world background hasn’t been explored that much

Hi, Good start! The synopsis is great! I believe that if continued, then it can go to great lengths... Keep up the work. The chapters are pretty interesting, I hope the author continues writing...

"What do you want junk?" the girls asked after the intercom is done. Ughh i wish i could tear their heads apart. I turned back around, gave them a death glare and went to the main office, it seems more important than these people.

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"I said I am going to be your first and your last. I wasn't talking about the bloody layers of skin. I was talking about your soul," he clarified. That was when his eyes suddenly changed to pitch black and not just his pupils, his entire eyeball. Panic shot up Manila's heart and choked her. She couldn't scream and she couldn't breathe. That was when she saw his fangs as he parted his lips in a sinister smile. "I am going to mark you as mine," he declared.

-The Mitier, don't like to fight if they have someone to do it for them, they will certantly offer an alliance with one of the 2 big clans, and then make them invade the other one. This is something probably is about to happen or already happening on the south borders of the forest -Aidan explained