My Supreme Lord System : Obey Your Lord

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I normally LOVE criticizing novels! Hell, there was a time I was criticized for being too harsh to the authors due to my critiques!But hell if I don't love this story …A BEAUTIFUL execution of a new premise in a story, no overused reincarnation/transmigration/back-in-time or anything of the sort. A child inheriting his grandfather's empire while having to fight for his rights with his other family members (father, mother, brothers) be it in real life or in a VR game.I normally write reviews either due to disappointment (unfortunately, on this site, this is the most prevalent review one can expect from) or potential of the story (normally due to writing quality being really bad, but its premise being way too great to ignore).Guess what, this story falls under NEITHER.It's got AWESOME characters, world background and story development (at least for now) and stability of updates seems to be on a daily release (again, for now).Writing quality is also really nice; it has nicely split paragraphs and very good sentences' structures. Rich enough vocabulary and grammar is pretty nice.The only critique the author still has to work on (for now) is proper tenses usage. He messes them up from time to time, but it is NOWHERE NEAR the mix-up most other novels on this site have. Unfortunately, due to me being me, that still warrants one less star on `Writing Quality`, making it a total of 4.Other than that? It's 5 star for now! Making the overall rating a 4.8.Cheers.

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I've read the raw (which is really good) on Qidian. I might be wrong but I'm pretty sure that 'filial piety' was used instead of 'debauched devotion'. But overall this is a really good read.

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Writing quality is alright Updating stability is great!Story development is very ehh the novel goes way to fast and I don’t mean in terms of chapter I mean in the time frame the novel is set on The first week he manages to do way to much. It should have taken him atleast a few months Ex: Charlotte and MC relationship turns romantic in the same day they met that isn’t realstic it should have been spread through atleast 1 month in novel time so the relationships can develop In a week he managed to befriend the daughter of the USA President conquer a sword trail get a power that isn’t from this universe, survive a elevator malfunction and fought a monster I feel the time frame is just in unrealsticAnother issue is his attempt to get the instructor to teach him, him apparently being the lord and then getting caught but he somehow gets away from it cause of a misunderstanding that doesn’t make sense anybody would know he was lying Character design is alright world background hasn’t been explored that much