Alright, story but hard to read as the mc is so small-minded... for an mc with a power like his, this is awful.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Loved it...but it just....the plot needs to be more original ...not the main plot but the sub plots...if you konw what i mean. and also the writing quality needs to be somewhat improve.
The start of the story may be off putting to some people but the development is good. you gotta keep on reading if you wanna get to the good parts that'll keep you hooked.
pure trash. for starters it is unreadable with all the errors and Grammer problems. if I'm going to pay to read something I don't want to feel like I'm proofreading a third graders creative writing project. 2nd I already read this book but it was written by Jksmanga WTH the only original part is the cat. how does stuff like this get signed and then shoved down our thoughts in recommended novels? this should be taken down error corrected and then blacklisted for plagerism
One of the best novel i read on this platforn and its still developin in quiet a good way. i hope its a long story ?. keep up the good work neo from matrix ?? lol me
Before his eyes stood a boy so skinny he knew he wouldn't last long. So without even bothering to respond to the boy in front of him. He kept writing. But for some reason, the boy didn't leave. Minutes turned into hours yet he kept standing there. It would be rude for the boy to speak. After 4 hours when the sun was setting the soldier decided to look up. "What do you want" is all that came from his mouth. "I want to enlist" was all that was heard. If one heard those words from a distance and seeing the boy.
I waited at the table since the preparation was almost done. Dad came out of the kitchen with three plates on hand he said "Sorry for the wait, here you go. I'll just wake your mom up".
The other two men were experienced pugilists and after seeing one of their own had fallen, they did not dare to be careless anymore and had immediately attacked Yi Ping with their swords! All their attacking strokes were lethal!
In contrast, Madam Zheng was much calmer, most of her attention on her daughter. Mei Lin, on the other hand, looked like a cat whose tail had been stepped on when she noticed his existence again.
