Alright, story but hard to read as the mc is so small-minded... for an mc with a power like his, this is awful.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Loved it...but it just....the plot needs to be more original ...not the main plot but the sub plots...if you konw what i mean. and also the writing quality needs to be somewhat improve.
The start of the story may be off putting to some people but the development is good. you gotta keep on reading if you wanna get to the good parts that'll keep you hooked.
pure trash. for starters it is unreadable with all the errors and Grammer problems. if I'm going to pay to read something I don't want to feel like I'm proofreading a third graders creative writing project. 2nd I already read this book but it was written by Jksmanga WTH the only original part is the cat. how does stuff like this get signed and then shoved down our thoughts in recommended novels? this should be taken down error corrected and then blacklisted for plagerism
One of the best novel i read on this platforn and its still developin in quiet a good way. i hope its a long story ?. keep up the good work neo from matrix ?? lol me
