Let me just say this: the pacing in these chapters is absolutely masterful and I need to talk about it. The author takes what could have been a boring 'training montage' and turns it into one of the most engaging sequences I've read in a cultivation novel. Here's how they do it.
First, the reveal. Chapter 7 drops the Chaos Spiritual Root bomb and immediately pivots to the comedic crisis of 'we can't afford to raise her.' That's a brilliant structural choice—instead of letting the protagonist bask in glory, the author slaps her (and us) with reality. Genius means nothing without resources. The mood shifts from 'WOW SHE'S AMAZING' to 'OH NO WE'RE BROKE' in about three paragraphs, and it keeps you hooked because now there's a problem to solve.
Then the training sequence. The author could have summarized a month of training in a paragraph. Instead, we get the horse stance (forty-five minutes, 'near death'), the sword thrusts (one hundred, then a thousand), and the medicinal bath (STINK). Each beat has its own rhythm—the horse stance is pure physical comedy with Gu Chenguang taking notes like 'Status: Near Death — Note: Can still hold on for a bit longer,' the sword practice has that devastating reveal that Shen Qingchen trained for ONE HUNDRED AND TEN YEARS, and the bath is just pure sensory horror.
But here's what I love: after all that suffering, the breakthrough happens THREE DAYS LATER. Mid-stage Qi Refining. In three days. And then Shen Qingchen has to tell her to SLOW DOWN. The genius dilemma: not being allowed to cultivate too fast. That's such a clever reversal of the usual cultivation novel trope where the protagonist is always rushing forward. Here, the problem isn't that she's too slow—it's that she's too fast and they can't afford the spiritual energy consumption.
The structure of the daily routine that follows—morning training, noon cultivation (strictly limited to four hours), afternoon baths and lessons, evening consolidation—creates a satisfying rhythm. It's repetitive in the way real training is repetitive, but the author varies it enough that it never drags. And the month-later check-in with Gu Chenguang's notebook summary ('The sect is about to go bankrupt') is the perfect comedic button on the whole arc.
Then immediately—without a breath—the Shen Qingchen departure scene. He leaves on a dangerous mission, the brothers give him a ridiculous send-off, he forgets his food, and we're left with this quiet moment of her giving him back the candy. The pacing never lets you settle. Just when you think the training arc is over, the story pivots to the next emotional beat. I stayed up way too late reading this.