Timeless Armor - Reviews

I CAN HARDLY READ IT BECOZ OF THE TERRIBLE ENGLISH. PLS CAN YOU FIX IT.

hello author-san, I am a new reader of your work... despite all of the hate comments, I am gonna read your work.  well.... everyone has a bad day and I had the worst so how bad it can be.. right??

Overall i do say it's very good, atleast the first 49 ch. and that's all i read. it lack charchter design and world building hence thars why 3,2 stars

Now, a like-minded 24-year old individual, she was a blossomed beauty. She wasn't the cutie as she was before. She was devious and she was cunning, and it was the traits that had grown into her younger sibling, Helena.

"Okay?"

Perhaps valor?

"You... Have improved?"

Capacity, not potential.

And unknowingly he had been looking at her exquisite face looking through every detail as he remembered he'd marked her as his own.

"Wai-"

The woman realised her rejection and then stood up abruptly, storming off. Her two friends looked at them apologetically before scurrying after her.

Seriously, is it this easy to earn someone's pity? Then why wasn't I helped back then? Is it the looks? Hmm?