Timeless Armor

I CAN HARDLY READ IT BECOZ OF THE TERRIBLE ENGLISH. PLS CAN YOU FIX IT.

hello author-san, I am a new reader of your work... despite all of the hate comments, I am gonna read your work.  well.... everyone has a bad day and I had the worst so how bad it can be.. right??

Overall i do say it's very good, atleast the first 49 ch. and that's all i read. it lack charchter design and world building hence thars why 3,2 stars

Now, a like-minded 24-year old individual, she was a blossomed beauty. She wasn't the cutie as she was before. She was devious and she was cunning, and it was the traits that had grown into her younger sibling, Helena.

"Okay?"

Perhaps valor?