I would like to say right off the bat this is a well written story despite only having four chapters. They know what they want this story to be and the characters feel real enough to have emotions for their plight. It has an old fashion Japanese setting. I can tell by their writing style this isn't their first rodeo and I am impressed with how vivid the descriptions are. I want to wish the author goodluck as they keep approaching this series. Respectfully Mirai asked me to move this comment over so I am doing so ^^
